The mass media including TV, Radio and newspaper influence our society and shape our opinions and characters. What is your opinion?
The mass media have started the era of information, communication and knowledge sharing with the globe. The influence of mass media such as radio, newspaper, television and more has sharpened the people’s characters and opinions in many facets of life. Some people believe that invention in the mass media have greatly influenced today’s communities and societies while others argue that the mass media have plenty of adverse effects on the people’s mind. I am inclined to believe that the mass media have certainly inspired people in terms of thoughts and behaviour. In the following paragraphs, I will analyse the inevitable reasons, and thus, will lead to a logical conclusion.
Firstly, in the today’s time, people are watching, reading and listening television, newspaper and radio respectively in order to gain knowledge, information and news. Moreover, people are also learning many vital things from television, which is helpful for them to change their characters and habits. For example, American television show provides series of treatment on how to quit smoking and drugs addiction, and people are watching it, and trying to be addiction free.
Secondly, newspaper and radio provide various talk shows and articles on new research and development on ample of topics, which are extremely important to learn and implement in education or academics. As an example, research has shown that the University of Sydney recommends their students to read and listen to the newspaper and radio respectively in order to improve their academic assessments.
In conclusion, the foregoing discussion propounds the view that it can indeed say that the mass media has influenced our society in this fast-growing technological time to improve our behaviour and ideas. It is expected that the cognisance of fact and further, the government must establish the guidelines to easy access the mass media in every society.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, thus, while, for example, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.5418719212 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 8.36945812808 263% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 20.9802955665 91% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 31.9359605911 119% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 5.75862068966 226% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1640.0 1207.87684729 136% => OK
No of words: 301.0 242.827586207 124% => OK
Chars per words: 5.44850498339 5.00649968141 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9865354218 2.71678728327 110% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 139.433497537 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.580463131201 98% => OK
syllable_count: 503.1 379.143842365 133% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.931034482759 322% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.5024630542 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 37.3097954073 50.4703680194 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.666666667 104.977214359 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0833333333 20.9669160288 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.83333333333 7.25397266985 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235234244586 0.242375264174 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.077773259181 0.0925447433944 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0714242886061 0.071462118173 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12466026827 0.151781067708 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0767178150381 0.0609392437508 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 12.6369458128 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 53.1260098522 71% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.9458128079 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.63 11.5310837438 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.44 8.32886699507 113% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 55.0591133005 158% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.3980295567 115% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.5123152709 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.