Medical technology is responsible for the human's life expectancy. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Medical technology is responsible for the human's life expectancy. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In the past fifty years, modern technology in the field of medicine has rapidly advanced. In this essay, I shall discus in agreement that humans have increased their life expectancy far from past generations. Incentivizing holistic and innovative approaches has been the base for building new structures in the health care systems.

There are many reasons why technologies have significantly increased the lives of humans. One main reason is that medicine is using cutting edge machinery to learn about different diseases. Neither governments, nor general public are having a negative impact from such results. Therefore, advantages is medicine have increased our whole health care systems. For example, hospitals incorporate MRI's, cat-scans and e-xray technology to further understand the human body. The images that are printed help doctors determine cures for different disease. For example, chemo therapy is now used to cure cancer.

Firstly, governments have increased resources for doctors and health care specialists. Research suggests, that spending time and monetary value in order to search for cures of different diseases, may have positive outcomes in this industry. Secondly, organizations such as research centers and medical schools trial new medicine for patients through the use of different lab stations. Thirdly, the results of such studies help prevent future disease or invent new strategies for their use.

In conclusion, we have a clear picture of the positive influences of such technologies, past generations did not have a chance at such cures. The future predicts, in my opinion forms of healthcare systems are created for helping people to achieve better health. Life expectancy can be seen significantly growing, people have spend almost a lifetime finding cures for the treatment of disease.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 216, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
...rent diseases. Neither governments, nor general public are having a negative impact from such ...
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Line 7, column 327, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'spent'.
Suggestion: spent
...seen significantly growing, people have spend almost a lifetime finding cures for the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, third, thirdly, for example, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 20.9802955665 57% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 31.9359605911 97% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.75862068966 35% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1553.0 1207.87684729 129% => OK
No of words: 278.0 242.827586207 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.58633093525 5.00649968141 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84553292121 2.71678728327 105% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 139.433497537 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.629496402878 0.580463131201 108% => OK
syllable_count: 486.0 379.143842365 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6551724138 134% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.5024630542 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.0293951479 50.4703680194 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 91.3529411765 104.977214359 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3529411765 20.9669160288 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.29411764706 7.25397266985 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 6.9802955665 172% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.122772302109 0.242375264174 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0426603439158 0.0925447433944 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0317585921403 0.071462118173 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.080423303317 0.151781067708 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0152997967664 0.0609392437508 25% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 12.6369458128 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 53.1260098522 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.85 11.5310837438 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.43 8.32886699507 113% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 55.0591133005 160% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.94827586207 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.3980295567 81% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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