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Nowadays, people spend too much time at work to the extent that they hardly have time for their personal life. Discuss

One of the most conspicuous trends in today’s world is affecting personal life due to spending too much time on work in all over the world. There is a wide range of factors that account why this is happening. In my opinion, this situation can be remedied provided that some effective measures are taken.<o:p></o:p>

There is a myriad reason of this soaring concern, unlike everyday problem, which can be dealt with easily, shortage of time, which is extremely perilous can lead to an array of issues such as relationship problems and growth of children. Thanks to the aforementioned predicaments, it can not only affect people but also society can suffer immensely.<o:p></o:p>

Steps to deal with this problem are many, but the most important is in fact not only a remote and unexpected, but also accessible and practicable. The primary one stems from the facts that by ensuring implementation of fact and policies, the government authorities can help a native thrive. Besides, international organization and local authorities should
take all necessary initiative cumulatively. Only when – in all sectors are ensured, then there is a chance to see the progress in curbing the issue.<o:p></o:p>

To conclude, dealing with work-life balance is one of the prevalent problems that face people all over the world. Nevertheless, concrete steps discussed above can effectively strengthen the fight against and alleviate this growing issue. Its potential impact is indeed too dire to ignore.<o:p></o:p>

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 52, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, nevertheless, so, then, in fact, such as, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 20.9802955665 57% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 31.9359605911 97% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1773.0 1207.87684729 147% => OK
No of words: 249.0 242.827586207 103% => OK
Chars per words: 7.12048192771 5.00649968141 142% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 8.49095904726 2.71678728327 313% => Word_Length_SD is high.
Unique words: 158.0 139.433497537 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.63453815261 0.580463131201 109% => OK
syllable_count: 495.0 379.143842365 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 2.0 1.57093596059 127% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6551724138 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.5024630542 132% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 148.705359522 50.4703680194 295% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 197.0 104.977214359 188% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.6666666667 20.9669160288 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.77777777778 7.25397266985 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.12807881773 194% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 6.9802955665 43% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0684748096656 0.242375264174 28% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0287957762874 0.0925447433944 31% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0297083349574 0.071462118173 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.032767856728 0.151781067708 22% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0398017102889 0.0609392437508 65% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 25.9 12.6369458128 205% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 10.23 53.1260098522 19% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.54236453202 199% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.5 10.9458128079 169% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 24.31 11.5310837438 211% => Coleman_liau_index is high.
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.11 8.32886699507 121% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 55.0591133005 147% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 21.0 9.94827586207 211% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.3980295567 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.

Rates: 11.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 10.0 Out of 90
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