Nowadays Television has become an essential part of life. Medium to spread news & awareness and for some, it acts like a companion. What is your opinion
Nowadays television is becomes an essential part of peoples life. For many people it became a part of their life. Watching television is always debatable topic. There are many advantages and disadvantages of television. This will elaborate the both positive and negatives of watching television with plausible conclusion.
To begin with, television is part of family as member in each family. Many people watch television to know what happening in the world. It became most easy way to spread information. Many people plan their holidays by watching travels channel. Moreover television offers many channels like cooking, travel, sports, kids special, news. Many people try to cook different varieties of food from cookery channel, television plays a reality shows which attracts people a lot. For example, programs like master chef and big boss are famous worldwide where normal people can prove their talent. Hence, television became a medium between people and world.
On the other hand there are some drawbacks with television. People are becoming lazy by watching television. people are not participating in other activities like outdoor games sometimes forgetting their important works like eating sleep and office work. Children are more attracted to the television, hence it cause to physical fitness. For example, sitting in front of television without and physical work fat will be formed, where there is a change to get diabetics.
To conclude this, there are many advantages by watching television. Even though there are some draw backs with this, if people avoid television when they have necessary work there will be no cause to their life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, moreover, so, for example, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 20.9802955665 57% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 31.9359605911 106% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 5.75862068966 17% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1405.0 1207.87684729 116% => OK
No of words: 261.0 242.827586207 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.38314176245 5.00649968141 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65346071667 2.71678728327 98% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 139.433497537 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582375478927 0.580463131201 100% => OK
syllable_count: 444.6 379.143842365 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 12.6551724138 158% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.5024630542 63% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.5714164134 50.4703680194 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.25 104.977214359 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.05 20.9669160288 62% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 7.25397266985 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 6.9802955665 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 2.91625615764 240% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205895415052 0.242375264174 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.072762568859 0.0925447433944 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0861852408017 0.071462118173 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132546288882 0.151781067708 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.066456522932 0.0609392437508 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 12.6369458128 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 49.82 53.1260098522 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.9458128079 87% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.04 11.5310837438 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.32886699507 96% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 55.0591133005 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.94827586207 50% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.3980295567 69% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.