Nowadays TV has become an essential part of life. Medium to spread news & awareness and for some it acts like a companion. What is your opinion about this?

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Nowadays TV has become an essential part of life. Medium to spread news & awareness and for some it acts like a companion. What is your opinion about this?

The invention of the television around two decades back opened wide frontiers for transmitting the communication and awareness. As the technology is increasing latest variety of televisions are introduced to the market such as 3D and curved televisions. For some people it provides a big companion by the many number of channels. There is no single domestic family without television.
To begin with, Television provides a wide range of channels to choose from channels like music, movies, travel, cooking, sports etc. many people choose a holiday tour by watching them in travel channel and cooks different types of food items by knowing different recipes through cookery channel. Not only this, sport events like food ball and cricket can watch live on television. Television also provides a wide range of information from every corner of the world and outside of the world, it provides a lot of awareness.
On the flip side, watching television is a big time waster. People will not have outside amusements like movies, outdoor sports and humans forget their very important habits like sleep, food and personal work. As much as People glues to Watching television as much lazy they become. People will have the communication gap in the family. For Example, instead of talking at the dinner time family members are watching television.
To conclude this, television is a just part our life, it is not a companion to the people. We should not addict to TV. Controlling the watching television is very needed for children and adults, it is over duty limiting anything in too excess.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 150, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'increasing the latest'.
Suggestion: increasing the latest
...ion and awareness. As the technology is increasing latest variety of televisions are introduced t...
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Line 1, column 306, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun number seems to be countable; consider using: 'many numbers'.
Suggestion: many numbers
...ople it provides a big companion by the many number of channels. There is no single domesti...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, for example, such as, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 5.94088669951 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 20.9802955665 52% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 31.9359605911 122% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1327.0 1207.87684729 110% => OK
No of words: 261.0 242.827586207 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08429118774 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72862577663 2.71678728327 100% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 139.433497537 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567049808429 0.580463131201 98% => OK
syllable_count: 420.3 379.143842365 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6551724138 126% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.5024630542 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.7290265821 50.4703680194 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.9375 104.977214359 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3125 20.9669160288 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0625 7.25397266985 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 2.91625615764 309% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0978959818664 0.242375264174 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0366423407786 0.0925447433944 40% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0477230291742 0.071462118173 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0695044751258 0.151781067708 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0412731883806 0.0609392437508 68% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 12.6369458128 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 53.1260098522 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.9458128079 87% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 11.5310837438 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.32886699507 97% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 55.0591133005 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.94827586207 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.3980295567 81% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 62.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 56.5 Out of 90
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