Nowadays TV has become an essential part of life. Medium to spread news & awareness and for some it acts like a companion. What is your opinion about this?

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Nowadays TV has become an essential part of life. Medium to spread news & awareness and for some it acts like a companion. What is your opinion about this?

Television is one of the most important part of our life for not only entertainment perspective but a reasonable source of gaining information or knowledge in shape of news and programs. For some people, it is not less than a friend. This essay will discuss both positive and negative aspects of television and their impact on our life.
First of all, with the passage of time and enhanced media developments, people can now find a variety of programs on TV. Multiple TV channels provide news, live shows, dramas, movies. New technologies like cable networks and advanced internet facilities now make it easier for people to enjoy whatever they like to see on television.
However, in ancient time people had no source of information in their surrounding and they were dependent on newspaper, telephones and posts. Now broadcast technology is widespread and news spread like a fire in forest. Within seconds people get updates about natural disasters or emergencies.
In addition television is not less than a companion, especially for people who feel alone or get bored at home. Some of the negative aspects are watching cartoons on TV for long hours, Sexual contents or violent programs. At this point youngsters even prefer watching TV instead involving in outdoor leisure activities, which are quite essential and beneficial for their mental growth and health.
This essay discussed, how television watching is fast growing part in our daily life and how positive and negative factors are affecting us. It depends on our usage, especially parents should have important role to monitor and fix specific time for their children otherwise television is quite a source of information.

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Average: 9.3 (3 votes)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 4, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[2]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: addition,
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Line 4, column 112, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: Some
...le who feel alone or get bored at home. Some of the negative aspects are watching cartoons ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, second, so, in addition, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 8.36945812808 215% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 2.0 5.94088669951 34% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 31.9359605911 110% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1418.0 1207.87684729 117% => OK
No of words: 273.0 242.827586207 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19413919414 5.00649968141 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82209175158 2.71678728327 104% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 139.433497537 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59706959707 0.580463131201 103% => OK
syllable_count: 442.8 379.143842365 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.774265103 50.4703680194 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.285714286 104.977214359 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5 20.9669160288 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.42857142857 7.25397266985 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.12807881773 121% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 2.75862068966 217% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207394240502 0.242375264174 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0697392369418 0.0925447433944 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0348831073965 0.071462118173 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107165172229 0.151781067708 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0322443403815 0.0609392437508 53% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 12.6369458128 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 53.1260098522 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 11.5310837438 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.21 8.32886699507 111% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 55.0591133005 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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