Parents should be held legally responsible for their children’s acts. What is your opinion? Support it with personal example.
Recently the phenomenon of children’s unusual acts has sparked an ongoing controversy, which inevitably leads to a moot question, “are parents legally responsible for their children’s acts?” Whereas, it is a widely held view that parents cannot control the behaviors of their children all the time. I will discuss the controversial aspects of how children’s acts are influenced by their parents.
In terms of children’s nature, they love to imitate others rather than obeying the commands. Consequently, children’s childhood learning starts by observing and imitating their parents. For instance, toddlers start to utter those words which they often listen from their parents. As a result, if any adolescent speak bad words to his classmates, there is an obvious chance that his parents use those words in front of him.
Another facet worth discussing here is that we may often see few youths are engaged in quarreling to each other, which might also be imitated from those parents who often fight to each other. A study conducted by the University of Adelaide revealed that 2 out 5 high school going children become quarrelsome due to the family influences. Furthermore, due to lack of attention from working parents, children are gone astray in often cases.
Despite the inevitability of the fact, some people argue that parents cannot guide their children at all point of their life, thus parents are not responsible for their imbalanced acts. These people must be aware that the first foundation of children’s learning is their parents’ home. Therefore, I believe parents are held legally responsible for their children’s acts to many extent.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 192, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Whereas” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...responsible for their children’s acts?” Whereas, it is a widely held view that parents ...
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Line 5, column 440, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hildren are gone astray in often cases. Despite the inevitability of the fact, s...
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Line 7, column 374, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun extent seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much extent', 'a good deal of extent'.
Suggestion: much extent; a good deal of extent
...esponsible for their children’s acts to many extent.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, furthermore, if, may, so, therefore, thus, whereas, for instance, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 8.36945812808 12% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 20.9802955665 138% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 31.9359605911 97% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1414.0 1207.87684729 117% => OK
No of words: 264.0 242.827586207 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.35606060606 5.00649968141 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87344000876 2.71678728327 106% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 139.433497537 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.609848484848 0.580463131201 105% => OK
syllable_count: 411.3 379.143842365 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.1287348325 50.4703680194 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.833333333 104.977214359 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.9669160288 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.66666666667 7.25397266985 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.326111840656 0.242375264174 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.130866747495 0.0925447433944 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.117351642928 0.071462118173 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.211765548764 0.151781067708 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.134876486557 0.0609392437508 221% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 12.6369458128 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 53.1260098522 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 11.5310837438 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.32886699507 103% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 55.0591133005 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 192, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Whereas” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...responsible for their children’s acts?” Whereas, it is a widely held view that parents ...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 440, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hildren are gone astray in often cases. Despite the inevitability of the fact, s...
^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 374, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun extent seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much extent', 'a good deal of extent'.
Suggestion: much extent; a good deal of extent
...esponsible for their children’s acts to many extent.
^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, furthermore, if, may, so, therefore, thus, whereas, for instance, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 8.36945812808 12% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 20.9802955665 138% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 31.9359605911 97% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1414.0 1207.87684729 117% => OK
No of words: 264.0 242.827586207 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.35606060606 5.00649968141 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87344000876 2.71678728327 106% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 139.433497537 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.609848484848 0.580463131201 105% => OK
syllable_count: 411.3 379.143842365 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.1287348325 50.4703680194 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.833333333 104.977214359 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.9669160288 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.66666666667 7.25397266985 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.326111840656 0.242375264174 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.130866747495 0.0925447433944 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.117351642928 0.071462118173 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.211765548764 0.151781067708 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.134876486557 0.0609392437508 221% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 12.6369458128 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 53.1260098522 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 11.5310837438 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.32886699507 103% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 55.0591133005 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.