Some people believe that exploring outer space is important because it expands human knowledge and might lead to discoveries that will benefit humanity in the future. Other people believe that space exploration is a waste of money that could be better spent solving immediate problems here on Earth.
Choose which position you most agree with and discuss why you chose that position. Support your point of view with details from your own experiences, observations or reading
Ever since mankind has launched its first satellite in outer space, there is a race among many developed and developing nations. While a section of society believes it is a waste of resources, others are not in agreement with it. This essay will explain that space exploraion may not be need of the hour and same investment can be used in developing current planet and humanity.
Opponents of the idea argue that the world is struggling with numerous of problems such as poverty, hunger and unemployment. For example, there are many countries in Africa which are severly lacking in basic necessaties. People from those under priviledged countries are malnourished and not getting their daily portion of diet. Therefore, resources and money spent on space exploration should be diverted to such countries that will help in shaping the future of humanity.
Secondly, pollution has drastically increased in the space due to this sudden spurt in space satellite launches. Research has found out that not all satellites are returned from space successfully that led to pollution in space. For example, a recent study has confirmed that space is polluted due to frequent space shuttles visiting astronomical area. Therefore, the need of the hour is to control and limit space launches by different countries to save outer space.
In my opinion, idea of exploring space is nothing but an advertisment by powerful countries to show their might to the world. Therefore, it is advisable to spend the resources and money in right direction to protect and develop humanity.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, for example, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.5418719212 142% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 20.9802955665 76% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 31.9359605911 128% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.75862068966 174% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1332.0 1207.87684729 110% => OK
No of words: 255.0 242.827586207 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22352941176 5.00649968141 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79614718173 2.71678728327 103% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 139.433497537 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576470588235 0.580463131201 99% => OK
syllable_count: 414.0 379.143842365 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 14.7960493688 50.4703680194 29% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 102.461538462 104.977214359 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6153846154 20.9669160288 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.38461538462 7.25397266985 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.238293508095 0.242375264174 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0804047930413 0.0925447433944 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0482006694689 0.071462118173 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131688057415 0.151781067708 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.021669684976 0.0609392437508 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 12.6369458128 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 53.1260098522 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 11.5310837438 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.32886699507 106% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 55.0591133005 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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