Some people believe that it's not necessary to have internet access to live a full life. What is your opinion? Give reasons for your answer and include examples from your own experience.
These days, there is an ongoing debate between people that internet is required to live a full life. While it is possible to claim that internet provides myriad features and ease the day to day task, my view is that the advantages outweigh the disadvantages. In this essay, I shall discuss my point of view by analyzing both sides of the argument.
To start with, there are several reasons why internet is mandatory in individual life. One of them is ease of work such as communicating to relatives or friends. Firstly, it is claimed that internet access provides ample advantages such booking tickets, sending email, online meeting etc. It should also be taken into account that internet access is connected to electronic devices and providing all information related to vicinity and all over the world.
On contrary, those who argue for internet access provide doom life have a different view and say that it can actually be a good thing. Firstly, it is claimed that children grasp wrong information providing by phishing and dubious agency who's work is to spread virus or wrong information. Sometime, internet provide virus and demand ransom money. Then, there are concerns about safety of data associated with individual's life.
In recapitulate, while there are strong arguments on both sides of the case, my personal opinion is that internet is mandatory to live full life as it provides treasure of knowledge and demonstrate a epitome example. I would recommend that regime should be surveillance for wrong doers.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, first, firstly, if, so, then, while, such as, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 10.5418719212 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 20.9802955665 114% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 31.9359605911 91% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1272.0 1207.87684729 105% => OK
No of words: 251.0 242.827586207 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06772908367 5.00649968141 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71231361251 2.71678728327 100% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 139.433497537 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577689243028 0.580463131201 100% => OK
syllable_count: 411.3 379.143842365 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 4.6157635468 195% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.287771512 50.4703680194 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.8461538462 104.977214359 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3076923077 20.9669160288 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.76923076923 7.25397266985 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.33497536946 131% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14626714865 0.242375264174 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.053342374719 0.0925447433944 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0484816418631 0.071462118173 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.092038784969 0.151781067708 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0105679937394 0.0609392437508 17% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 12.6369458128 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 53.1260098522 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 11.5310837438 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 8.32886699507 103% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 55.0591133005 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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