Some people claim that digital age has made us lazier, others claim it has made us more knowledgable. Discuss both opinios and example
Recently, a debate on the digital age and its advantages has sparked an ongoing controversy, proponents believe it is beneficial for the society, whereas opponents think otherwise and suggested that it is making us dumb and impacting lives around the world. This essay will illustrate both sides of the arguments.
To begin with, in today’s world, it is irrefutable to ignore the technological advancement and its impact on the society, use of technology has certainly made us dependent and lazy but it has drastically changed the human history. Technology is a backbone of the modern world and used in many areas like transportation, communication, war, entertainment and education etc. For example, nowadays, it is hard to believe the life without mobile and computers, which are the gift of technology.
Further, technology certainly has demerits as well, humans are becoming dependent and suffering from many health issues. The young generation uses cars or other means of transport to travel to the shortest distance without thinking the consequences of health. Studies show more than 70% of kids in the USA and other developed countries have eyesight problems as they spend most of their productive time in front of the mobile or computer screens.
To sum up, as per preceded argument it is safe to say that technology has certainly helped humans with extraordinary inventions and made our life easier, but it is creating problems as well. In my view, it is an individual’s discretion to use the technology.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, well, whereas, for example, in my view, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 6.10837438424 16% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 8.36945812808 179% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 20.9802955665 91% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 31.9359605911 97% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1287.0 1207.87684729 107% => OK
No of words: 246.0 242.827586207 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23170731707 5.00649968141 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12527611312 2.71678728327 115% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 139.433497537 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.621951219512 0.580463131201 107% => OK
syllable_count: 405.0 379.143842365 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.5024630542 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.3545507561 50.4703680194 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.7 104.977214359 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6 20.9669160288 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.7 7.25397266985 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.107747765077 0.242375264174 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0341659505662 0.0925447433944 37% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0335536785604 0.071462118173 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0606421968719 0.151781067708 40% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0230855680307 0.0609392437508 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 12.6369458128 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 53.1260098522 89% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.9458128079 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.35 11.5310837438 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.51 8.32886699507 114% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 55.0591133005 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.94827586207 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.3980295567 112% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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