Some people think it is not necessary for adults to receive education in class. Self-study is a good way for them to study more effectively. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, there is an ongoing deliberation for adults don't need class for education, which attracted numerous of controversies and drawn the attention from the public. it can be agreed that, education don't require inperson class due to technology changes person can learn anywhere, whereas other stands contrary perspective. This essay will discuss both sides and lead to logical conclusion.
At the outset, although there are plethora of reason why adults don't require classroom for their education and the most conspicuous class="is">is that they mostly working class and at a same time they want to learn new things which class="is">is supported by online classes with the help of technology. To cite an example, class="there">there are myriads of online education websites available where people can take advantages to learn with their own flexible time. Therefore, for learning purpose adults don't require classroom and they manage them self with help of technology.
Another key justification for upholding view and trend class="is">is that, adults don't require teachers monitoring for their study, and they are enough mature to manage by own selves. Nevertheless, some people hold different prospective and believed education should be lead from classroom for everyone, to over counter their argument, I would like to assert the point when adults have technology solution without wasting their time on traveling and they can study on cheap prices than why to waste their resources on the same things. Hence, online education class="is">is in trend which enable global education platform for everyone.
Agglomerating points above, it can be concluded that, online education has advantages overweight to disadvantages, so adults can learn more with the help of online learning programs on minimum prices and their own convenience.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, nevertheless, so, therefore, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 6.10837438424 164% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 20.9802955665 100% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 31.9359605911 110% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 5.75862068966 243% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1636.0 1207.87684729 135% => OK
No of words: 280.0 242.827586207 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.84285714286 5.00649968141 117% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.95793571222 2.71678728327 146% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 139.433497537 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.580463131201 98% => OK
syllable_count: 490.5 379.143842365 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.5024630542 137% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 87.0114934937 50.4703680194 172% => OK
Chars per sentence: 163.6 104.977214359 156% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.0 20.9669160288 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.7 7.25397266985 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.33497536946 187% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201170845066 0.242375264174 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0916733533558 0.0925447433944 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0440369337435 0.071462118173 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123891690688 0.151781067708 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0464920988773 0.0609392437508 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.1 12.6369458128 159% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 26.14 53.1260098522 49% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 10.9458128079 152% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.89 11.5310837438 146% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.25 8.32886699507 111% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 55.0591133005 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.94827586207 146% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.3980295567 127% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.5123152709 162% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.