Some people think that it would be better for large companies and
industry to move to regional areas outside large urban centres.
Others believe that companies and industries should remain in
more urban areas.
Choose which position you most agree with and discuss why you
chose that position. Support your point of view with details from
your own experiences, observations or reading.
Owing to globalization and industrialization many companies have opened in large urban centres. Some people have suggested that the companies should move to city outskirts for proper utilization of city resources. This essay will argue that what are the benefits of having industries in regional areas.
To begin with, one direct benefit is pollution and crowding of the city will be significantly reduced by having industries in regional areas. As industries will move to outskirts, there will be no emission of greenhouse gases and environment will be pollution free. Additionally, some workforce has to relocate as well. For instance, a manufacturing industry need not be in the city, it can operate easily operate from a regional area. Therefore, it is better for the industries to city outskirts.
The other advantage is the development and job creation when the industries are moved shifted in regional areas. As regional areas lack infrastructure, setting up the industries will benefit the local population. They will get employment. Additionally, better infrastructure will be available for them due to the setup of an industry. Thus, helping the local population in a regional place.
This essay discussed advantages of setting up the industries in a regional area. In my opinion, it is advisable to open the industries in a regional area for the betterment of the local population.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, therefore, thus, well, as to, for instance, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 6.10837438424 180% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 8.36945812808 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 20.9802955665 48% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 31.9359605911 91% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 5.75862068966 243% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1189.0 1207.87684729 98% => OK
No of words: 221.0 242.827586207 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38009049774 5.00649968141 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85565412703 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.22424782582 2.71678728327 119% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 139.433497537 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.529411764706 0.580463131201 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 386.1 379.143842365 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.5024630542 68% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.6129965138 50.4703680194 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.2666666667 104.977214359 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.7333333333 20.9669160288 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.33333333333 7.25397266985 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 6.9802955665 158% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.281324558089 0.242375264174 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0989788184131 0.0925447433944 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0584871511087 0.071462118173 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181787512616 0.151781067708 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0555558906049 0.0609392437508 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 12.6369458128 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 53.1260098522 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.9458128079 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.33 11.5310837438 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.32886699507 103% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 55.0591133005 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.94827586207 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.3980295567 73% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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