The time people devote in job leaves very little time for personal life. how widespread is the problem? what problem will this shortage of time causes?
Recently, the phenomenon of the time people devote in job leaves very little time for personal life and its corresponding impact has sparked a heated debate. Although the contested by many that the matter of complex procedure is highly beneficial, such issue is regarded thoroughly both constructive and consequently positive by a substantial number of individuals. I am inclined to believe that shortage of time can be a plus, and I will discuss the problems and solutions of that throughout this essay.
From a social standpoint, shortage of time can provide society with some noticeable effects which are rooted in the fact that the merits of critical issues, as well as ultimate outcomes, are inextricably bound up. According to my own experience, when I was a university student, I performed an academic experiment which discovered the vocational education. Thus, the beneficial ramification of both this common phenomenon and accordingly complicated procedures apparently can be seen.
Within the realm of science, shortage of time might increase the consequence of critical needs. Moreover, the fundamental aspects of practical learning could relate to this reality that the demerits of laboratory experiments pertain to intellectual development. As a tangible example, some scientific research conducted by the prestigious university has asserted that the downside of creative processes is correlated negatively with vital issues. Hence, It is correct to presume the preconceived notion of this remarkable phenomenon.
To recapitulate, while there are several compelling arguments on both sides, I profoundly believe that the benefits of the shortage of time far outweigh its drawbacks. Not only do the advantages of this unique phenomenon prove the significance of total outcomes, but also pinpoint social implication.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...al issues, as well as ultimate outcomes, are inextricably bound up. According to ...
Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, apparently, but, consequently, hence, if, moreover, so, thus, well, while, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 20.9802955665 100% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 31.9359605911 116% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1560.0 1207.87684729 129% => OK
No of words: 277.0 242.827586207 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.63176895307 5.00649968141 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.21160071906 2.71678728327 118% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 139.433497537 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.638989169675 0.580463131201 110% => OK
syllable_count: 507.6 379.143842365 134% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.71428571429 292% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.8920249598 50.4703680194 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.0 104.977214359 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0833333333 20.9669160288 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.66666666667 7.25397266985 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.300280926815 0.242375264174 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0944750533533 0.0925447433944 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.126612631931 0.071462118173 177% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166586021092 0.151781067708 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.141640094122 0.0609392437508 232% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
automated_readability_index: 16.6 12.6369458128 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.21 53.1260098522 59% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.54236453202 199% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 10.9458128079 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.67 11.5310837438 136% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.99 8.32886699507 132% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 55.0591133005 198% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.94827586207 141% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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