What do you think of bidding to host sports events? Is it a blessing or a curse? Give your opinions.

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What do you think of bidding to host sports events? Is it a blessing or a curse? Give your opinions.

Recently, the phenomenon of offering price for adopting the hosting of sports events and its corresponding impacts has sparked a heated debate. Although this issue is beneficial as it is regarded by the substantial number of individuals both constructive and positive, others hold opponent views. I am inclined to believe that it can be plus as it could develop some brilliant aspects for its advocates.

From a social standpoint, the idea of bidding to performe sports events in the country can provide the society with noticeable effects which are rooted in the fact of development. From my own experience, when I was a university pupil, I performed an academic experiment which discovered these benefits. Firstly, hosting sports events including the Olampic Games or international footbal matches requires appropriate infrastructures, facilities and equipment. Hence, governments should construct or rebuild the relative items including the transportation system, roads, hospitals, hotels, sport clubs and the places which these events are held in like stadiums. Therefore, the town will be improved and many citizens' difficulties will be addressed. Furthermore, hosting these popular events attracts a considerable number of tourists into town which is paramount for economic growth. Moreover, hosting loads of i9nternational guests enhance and develop an array of job opportunities for settlers.

On the one hand, there is no doubt that the idea of accepting the hosting of sports events has some opponents. They asserted that these events are quite costly and governments should concentrate on the city's priorities including education, health and the youths.

In conclusion, while there are several compelling arguments on both sides, I profoundly believe that the merits of bidding to host sports events specifically the international ones far more outweigh their demerits.

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Average: 8.8 (1 vote)
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, hence, if, moreover, so, therefore, while, in conclusion, no doubt

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 20.9802955665 100% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 31.9359605911 85% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1612.0 1207.87684729 133% => OK
No of words: 284.0 242.827586207 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.67605633803 5.00649968141 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11481826737 2.71678728327 115% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 139.433497537 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.62323943662 0.580463131201 107% => OK
syllable_count: 491.4 379.143842365 130% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.3500404922 50.4703680194 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.0 104.977214359 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8461538462 20.9669160288 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.30769230769 7.25397266985 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182751046694 0.242375264174 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0652951698178 0.0925447433944 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0540917871832 0.071462118173 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114211311067 0.151781067708 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.028883093467 0.0609392437508 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 12.6369458128 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 53.1260098522 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.9458128079 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.66 11.5310837438 136% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.29 8.32886699507 124% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 55.0591133005 183% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.5123152709 152% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 88.8888888889 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 80.0 Out of 90
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