Can you please give band score for this writing task 1 for IELTS

Submitted by RAJANIDAS on Mon, 09/02/2019 - 04:54

I am appearing for IELTS and my test date is on 7th sept 2019. Can anyone give band score and give suggestion

Dear Arpita,

Thanks for writing to me. I am really excited to get the news that you have decided to stay in our neighborhood. I'm sure you will like the ambience and infrastructure present in this society. As you had mentioned in the previous letter, you'll want information of children's education, I did some research and I found out one an institution to quality as per your need.
The school name's chubby Cheeks which reside in the next block and the faculty members are very caring and helpful and they are well-trained and can speaking fluent English and Hindi so they will be able to understand your 1-year-old baby girl properly. they enrol only children from 45 days to 5 years old and their recreation hall have all sorts of amenities. they have separate playhouses for different age groups and each playhouse is properly equipped with toys for the development of the toddlers.
I like this institution and my girl is also studying and I am sure you will also, like the well equipments school. they will be installing computer based technology and am sure your toddler will love this.Let me know when you will be coming with all the flight details.

Looking forward to hear from you,

Yours truely,
Rajani