*Answer both questions fully
*Write in clear paragraphs, each with a main idea and supporting sentences
*Use higher-level vocabulary with an awareness of collocation
*Provide an overview with detailed comparisons in Task 1
*Indicate a clear position and stick to it consistently in Task 2
*Produce generally error-free sentences
You may find essay peers to
You may find essay peers to give your help.
how authentic is the checking
how authentic is the checking on this website? Ive scored above 8 in everything except writing, I require a 7.5 in writing. Any tips?
I have read one of your
I have read one of your essays in task II:
https://www.testbig.com/ielts-writing-task-ii-ielts-academic-essays/som…
and it really deserves 8.0 or over. I didn't see any issues in the essays. Maybe you have problems on task I.
The majority of news being reported is bad such as wars, famines,accidents and crime.
What do you think it is?
Should you think there must be balanced between good or bad news...
(Kindly guide me it is my first essay.. I want to get 7 in ielts)
Media determines the sheer picture of the society by presenting good or bad news, therefore to educate human being, news agencies have to use obscene and violent content which ends up with terror among the society and media gets voluminous publicity when they broadcast inhuman news. Hence, I firmly believe there must be equilibriume between good or bad news.
To begin with, burgeoning civil crime has led the news channel to propagates only on provoking news which not only increases viewer rates but also consolidates channel's overall income. Thus, news which is fails to generate reader or viewer interest does not consider genuine channel and later they expel from top possitions. So as to maintain higher position they use bad news as a marketing technique to remain in the list of top channels ; this has become a global trend among the news directors to use more violent contents to pop up in the commercial sectors which is highly criticised by several social experts.
Furthermore, one bad news catches public eyes instantaneously, regional riots at Utter pradesh in India has been highly instigated by various news agencies. This act ends up with disintegration of the states with several caualities. Political parties offers million of currency to the top news reporters to present news which traps innocent mind to vandalise public property. So, to gain more monetary benefits news agencies use more bad news than good one.
Having pondered over all the aforementioned aspects of media's dependence upon bad news it can be concluded that media uses more bad news in order to gain more TRP and currency but it is news reporter's ethical duty to maintain balance among good or bad news so that communal harmony can be maintained.