Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Young people enjoy life more than older people do.

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Young people enjoy life more than older people do.

A person can never forget his childhood days. When a person thinks about his past memories then he feels young and refreshing again. It is true that a young people will enjoy life more than older people. When a person is young then s/he lives for himself, enjoy every moment of life and roam with friends. But, as the person gets older then he lives for other, always thinks that what he would can do to make his family happy, some think about making money for better career. But, when a person is young he is not confined in such type of limitations.

A young people have fewer responsibilities a...

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Sentence: A young people have fewer responsibilities as compare to older people on their shoulder.
Description: A conjunction, subordinating is not usually followed by a verb, base: uninflected present, imperative or infinitive
Suggestion: as compare -> as compared

Sentence: A person who is young have to
Suggestion: A person who is young has to

Sentence: But, in old age, it becomes difficult for a person to spent time with their friends.
Description: The token to is not usually followed by a verb, past participle
Suggestion: Refer to to and spent

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No. of Words: 589 350 (write the essay in half an hour)

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Score: 27 in 30
Category: Excellent Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 3 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 27 15
No. of Words: 589 350
No. of Characters: 2639 1500
No. of Different Words: 213 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.926 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.48 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.235 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 161 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 90 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 52 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 35 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 21.815 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 12.555 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.63 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.368 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.528 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.252 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5

today I appeared for real toefl exam. Please tell me one thing in the writing section I made one mistake:- in the last line of 30 minutes passage I've done one spelling mistake as I've to write "which", but I've written "awhich". Please tell me how much score ets will deduct for this mistake.

And in one speaking I've completed in 55 seconds, as there are 5 seconds left so in which I started concluding, but I'm unable to do that and in between time goes over. So in this case how much score did ets deduct.

The essay E-rater will consider awhich both gram and spelling errors since 'which' is a connector, but human grader can figure it out that this is only a spelling error. If you don't have other grammar and spelling errors, there is no problem.

For speaking, it will affect a little bit, but not too much since you have finished the main content.

Overall, if you only have those two small errors, it means you will get very good TOEFL marks.

Let us know your good news.

If there are any grammatical mistakes occur then does "awhich" affects whole score. I've written the essay in 23 minutes and take 7 minutes to recorrect it like grammar issues etc. but in english there must be a probability that grammatical issue occurs so in that case how much scores will they deduct means I wanted to know according to your prediction if you are checking an exam then how much scores did you deduct for "awhich". Please tell me asap.

The grammar errors will not affect the final scores by testbig essay E-rater if the errors are less than two. But we don't know how ETS will evaluate grammar and spelling errors exactly.

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Anyway, we don't think the error is a big issue.

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While it is true that traditional record labels (ii) _________ their artists—demanding indefensibly large percentages of their profits

like here please tell me "demanding indefensibly large percentages of their profits" represents what means it is linked to which part of sentence

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In order to defend downloading music illegally, it’s necessary to engage in a bit of ethical (i) ___________. While it is true that traditional record labels (ii) _________ their artists—demanding indefensibly large percentages of their profits—downloading a song illegally is equally (iii) _________, because it robs both the label and the artist.