Some people believe that the Earth is being harmed (damaged) by human activity. Others feel that human activity makes the Earth a better place to live. What is your opinion? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Essay topics: Some people believe that the Earth is being harmed (damaged) by human activity. Others feel that human activity makes the Earth a better place to live. What is your opinion? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

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The progress made by human civilization has been tremendous in recent years. We are living in a technologically advanced society unimagined by our ancestors. However this progress has harmed our planet Earth to an extent that if steps towards prevention are not taken soon, we will deprive our future generations of its natural beauty and other critical resources. Also we are putting our life in peril by overlooking our mistakes.

Firstly, as the quality of life has improved in recent years many people are capable of purchasing their own vehicles. This has increased the use of private vehicles on roads. As a result the level of noxious gases released in air is increasing at an alarming r ...

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