TPO 31 - Question 1 Parents need to make sure their children lead healthy lives. What can parents do to help their children have healthy lifestyles?

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Don't forget verbs and connectors to sentences more clear. Look at the last example:
for example, all the kids to ride the bicycle for the school, and they are doing, take them to the movie whichever they like.

should be:
for example, all the kids have to ride the bicycle for the school, and after they do the activities, take them to the movie whichever they like.