1. two reasons are not good enough for the 'healthy lifestyles', here 'healthy lifestyles' means something like: wake up earlier, clean the teeth, do sports....
2. It is for 'children' not for 'students'
3. Don't need 'in my view' for the beginning.
4. Don't repeat words, phrases and sentences. Still we can find some duplicated words.
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1. two reasons are not good enough for the 'healthy lifestyles', here 'healthy lifestyles' means something like: wake up earlier, clean the teeth, do sports....
2. It is for 'children' not for 'students'
3. Don't need 'in my view' for the beginning.
4. Don't repeat words, phrases and sentences. Still we can find some duplicated words.
listen to a sample:
http://www.testbig.com/toefl-speaking/q1/tpo-31-question-1-parents-need…