TPO 34 - Question 1 Your university plans to open a cafe inside the campus library. Do you think this is a good idea? Explain why or why not.

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1. need to remove one sentence from reason one. it is too long.

2. remove the sentence from reason two: 'for example, when....' it is extra.
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correct time pattern:
introduction: 5 seconds ( need to remove 'in my point of view'. we can simply say: It is a bad idea.)
reason one: 20 seconds
reason two: 20 seconds