TPO 19 - Question 2 More and more people are buying items on the Internet and from magazines or catalogs. Other people prefer shopping in a store. Which do you prefer and why?

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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 439.0 444.711560045 99% => OK
No of words: 116.0 116.580246914 100% => More words wanted. You may: choose simpler words or speak faster or remove hesitations or remove long pauses, and fully use the time, do NOT save one or two seconds.
Chars per words: 3.78448275862 3.81502700369 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.28181803491 3.28032121604 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 1.90193202353 1.8723322822 102% => OK
Unique words: 72.0 76.076318743 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.620689655172 0.655143326166 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Syllable count: 137.7 141.574747475 97% => OK
Avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.21358024691 99% => OK

Performance on coherence:
Topic speech coherence ratio: 0.131679226468 0.0738818816272 178% => OK

Acoustic performance on paragraphs:
How many acoustic paragraphs: 1.0 3.20202020202 31% => OK
Average paragraph length: 116.0 60.3232687746 192% => OK
STD paragraph length: 0.0 17.3634065801 0% => OK
Average paragraph duration: 42.57 22.9064221017 186% => OK
STD paragraph duration: 0.0 6.49597621602 0% => The duration of acoustic paragraphs keeps same.

Acoustic performance on sentences:
How many acoustic sentences: 25.0 31.1548821549 80% => OK
Average acoustic sentence length: 4.64 4.0588447711 114% => OK
STD acoustic sentence length: 4.40799274047 3.18357895611 138% => OK
Average acoustic sentences duration: 1.6716 1.46810986539 114% => OK
STD acoustic sentences duration: 1.53631163505 1.01537252472 151% => OK

Acoustic performance on acoustic silence:(An acoustic silence means a little pause between two or more words)
How many acoustic silence: 19.0 28.6644219978 66% => OK
Total acoustic silence duration: 3.17 5.28593714927 60% => OK
Average acoustic silence duration: 0.166842105263 0.187982170178 89% => OK
STD acoustic silence duration: 0.190236767479 0.154715141812 123% => OK

Acoustic performance on acoustic words:
Total word duration: 36.0 35.408047138 102% => OK
Average word duration: 0.310344827586 0.306236595465 101% => OK
STD word duration: 0.191216302122 0.198589292138 96% => OK

Disfluencies: like hesitations, or 'ehn' or taking a long time to pronounce a word:
How many disfluencies: 7.0 6.3164983165 111% => OK
Total_disfluencies_duration: 5.8 5.14435465769 113% => OK
Total acoustic noise duration: 1.97 2.80480359147 70% => OK

Acoustic rates:
Total speech duration: 42.57 45.0716498316 94% => Talk more. Do not save time. People can talk 4-5 words in one second.
Compare to expected duration: 0.946 1.00159221848 94% => OK
Rate of silence: 0.446323702138 0.637764685501 70% => OK
Rate of speech: 2.72492365516 2.58495923209 105% => OK
Rate of speech by unique words: 1.69133192389 1.68816559523 100% => OK
Rate of word duration by unique words: 2.0 2.15290372801 93% => OK
Average articulation rates: 0.509756862069 0.343871460585 148% => OK

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It may have duplicated content. Need to use the words more efficiently.
Don't repeat words, phrases and sentences. or More unique words wanted.

Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by speech e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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Note: the speech e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas.

20 in 30

the biggest issue is that the reason doesn't focus on the topic. for example, in the reason one, the topic sentence is convenience, then all the content should be related to convenience, like: why it is convenient, what are the advantages of convenience. while you talked about save time and enjoyable. it is out of convenience.

the second issue is the conclusion. it takes 6 seconds for the conclusion, while it is not necessary.