Only need to give two reasons for the arguments, while you give three of them. So it is not done on time. even though you said: second...
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should be:
'Even if there are new songs he hasn't practiced and tonight is the last practice...'
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better to say 'the girl', 'the man'. it is confusing to say 'she' or 'he'
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Only need to give two reasons for the arguments, while you give three of them. So it is not done on time. even though you said: second...
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should be:
'Even if there are new songs he hasn't practiced and tonight is the last practice...'
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better to say 'the girl', 'the man'. it is confusing to say 'she' or 'he'