Some people like humorous stories that make them laugh. Others prefer stories that are more
serious and make them think. Which type of story do you prefer, why? Include details and examples in your explanation.
25 in 30
Don't use adjectives, like 'it is very important', 'it is great'
Thanks for your comments. What should I use instead?
For example, I said: " I those skills are very important for me as a computer engineer"
You may use 'very important' once, that's OK, it is not bad, but once you use 'very great' again, then it doesn't give examiners good expressions. If you just want marks around 21, there are no problem. But if you want a mark over 25, try to avoid the style.