The 21 st century has begun. What changes do you think this new century will bring?
Nowadays, some people may hold the opinion that by beginning the 21 st century there are a lot of changes in people life, but others have a negative attitude toward it. As far as I am concerned, I agree that, this century bring a high levels of changes. M y arguments for this point are listed as follows.
Firstly, the widespread use of internet in this century caused to people get a large amount of information in different field. Furthermore, people can expand their knowledge scope in early age and this issue helps them to makes decision without making mistake. My sister is a good example for this issue. She is 18 years old and she wants to attend the college but she has a lot of information about majors, colleges and job situations by surfing the internet. She is not only experienced person on this issue, but also she makes a large number of friends by this way, so now she can give advice to others with a brilliant vision. The 21 st century will provide more and more situation for having knowledgeable people that it will improve the level of people life.
Secondly, in this century people do not have enough time to keeping touch to each others. What I mean is that they are busy because of life expenses. They cannot even spend time with their family so using of variety of applications can help them. It means that classical communication will change in the future and replace with the modern one. For instance, I am far from away my family because I study at another city that has prestigious and top notch university so I do not enough time to spending it with my family and I should talk them with new applications that have expanded. In addition Using of this applications will widespread more and more.
In a word, by taking into account all these factors, we may come to the conclusion that the 21st century will provide situation for getting more and more information and change the ways that people can to be keep in touch together.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...erson on this issue, but also she makes a large number of friends by this way, so now she can giv...
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Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: top-notch
...t another city that has prestigious and top notch university so I do not enough time to s...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: addition,
...new applications that have expanded. In addition Using of this applications will widespr...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ple can to be keep in touch together.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, second, secondly, so, for instance, i mean, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 43.0788530466 114% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1686.0 1977.66487455 85% => OK
No of words: 369.0 407.700716846 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.56910569106 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38284983912 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49437937218 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 212.727598566 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.525745257453 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 533.7 618.680645161 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Interrogative: 2.0 0.994623655914 201% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.0852532184 48.9658058833 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.6666666667 100.406767564 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5 20.6045352989 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.77777777778 5.45110844103 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.331901022443 0.236089414692 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127717659881 0.076458572812 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.174307998001 0.0737576698707 236% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.271796658797 0.150856017488 180% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.255066629293 0.0645574589148 395% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 58.1214874552 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.23 10.9000537634 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.2 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 86.8835125448 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.2 Out of 6.0
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