In the Bayhead Public Library, books that are rarely borrowed continue to take up shelf space year after year, while people who want to read a recent novel frequently find that the library's only copy is checked out. Clearly, the library's plan to replace books that are borrowed no more than once a year with sufficient copies of more recent books will solve this problem. The protest we have heard since this plan was made public has come from a small, and thus unrepresentative, group of some thirty people and so should therefore be ignored.
This argument is related to the plan which was made public by the library and the rising protest against it by a small bunch of people. Author says that rarely borrowed books, not having any reader, are occupying shelves.While recent novels frequently read are always checked out.The library planned to replace the old books by sufficient copies of newly arriving novels to solve the problem. This plan proposed by the library is opposed by a group of some thirty people.
Books are full of knowledge, whether it is new or old. Books which are occupying the library shelves might be related to historical events, constitution, laws, theories or encyclopedia. All these books are very important and are "must to have" for any library. Turning old or being read in a year will not decrease its importance. Since, library has not mentioned which books are being replaced, what they are related to, this argument will remain abysmal.
Readers have different interest in different books. Some like fiction, some like facts, some like poetry,and so on. Current generation is interested in reading novels as they try to attach themselves to the protagonist or the antagonist and try to imitate their behaviour and way of living. Book selection is totally based on the age group as well as interest of readers. So, replacing old books by new novels will not do any good to the readers. It will upset some readers at the cost of happiness and interest of some others.
According to author, this plan is opposed by some people. To stop that protest, library should carefully analyse the interest of all the readers of all age groups and then take the decision accordingly. Library should keep in mind that books which are termed as new will turn into old one after a few years. Being a novel, it will be less important as compared to books on history,laws,etc. Whether the opposition is by an unrepresented bunch of people or by a crowd of people with a leader, both their views must be carefully listened and decision should be taken in their best interest.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 222, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: While
...aving any reader, are occupying shelves.While recent novels frequently read are alway...
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Line 1, column 222, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...aving any reader, are occupying shelves.While recent novels frequently read are alway...
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Line 1, column 281, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
... frequently read are always checked out.The library planned to replace the old book...
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Line 5, column 105, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , and
...ction, some like facts, some like poetry,and so on. Current generation is interested...
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Line 7, column 381, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , laws
...mportant as compared to books on history,laws,etc. Whether the opposition is by an un...
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Discourse Markers used:
['accordingly', 'if', 'so', 'then', 'well', 'while', 'as well as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.220551378446 0.25644967241 86% => OK
Verbs: 0.182957393484 0.15541462614 118% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0827067669173 0.0836205057962 99% => OK
Adverbs: 0.047619047619 0.0520304965353 92% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0275689223058 0.0272364105082 101% => OK
Prepositions: 0.110275689223 0.125424944231 88% => OK
Participles: 0.0726817042607 0.0416121511921 175% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.65918803241 2.79052419416 95% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0325814536341 0.026700313972 122% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.001811407834 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.105263157895 0.113004496875 93% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0300751879699 0.0255425247493 118% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0125313283208 0.0127820249294 98% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2064.0 2731.13054187 76% => OK
No of words: 352.0 446.07635468 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.86363636364 6.12365571057 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33147354134 4.57801047555 95% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.355113636364 0.378187486979 94% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.275568181818 0.287650121315 96% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.164772727273 0.208842608468 79% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.102272727273 0.135150697306 76% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65918803241 2.79052419416 95% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 207.018472906 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.511363636364 0.469332199767 109% => OK
Word variations: 54.1439846237 52.1807786196 104% => OK
How many sentences: 19.0 20.039408867 95% => OK
Sentence length: 18.5263157895 23.2022227129 80% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.3958198121 57.7814097925 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.631578947 141.986410481 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5263157895 23.2022227129 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.368421052632 0.724660767414 51% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 5.14285714286 78% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 3.58251231527 140% => OK
Readability: 46.0831339713 51.9672348444 89% => OK
Elegance: 1.56310679612 1.8405768891 85% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.39887124001 0.441005458295 90% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0864723751854 0.135418324435 64% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0495593627489 0.0829849096947 60% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.483590932393 0.58762219726 82% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.137068887854 0.147661913831 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.138909094671 0.193483328276 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0916071539829 0.0970749176394 94% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.29063390605 0.42659136922 68% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0817090889028 0.0774707102158 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.274534226244 0.312017818177 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0876933629353 0.0698173142475 126% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.33743842365 96% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 6.87684729064 87% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.82512315271 104% => OK
Positive topic words: 3.0 6.46551724138 46% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 5.36822660099 75% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.82389162562 106% => OK
Total topic words: 10.0 14.657635468 68% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6 -- The score is based on the average performance of 20,000 argument essays. This e-grader is not smart enough to check on arguments.
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