The following appeared in a letter to the editor of the Balmer Island Gazette.
"On Balmer Island, where mopeds serve as a popular form of transportation, the population increases to 100,000 during the summer months. "
Write a response in which you discuss what questions would need to be answered in order to decide whether the recommendation is likely to have the predicted result. Be sure to explain how the answers to these questions would help to evaluate the recommendation.
The argument prompt by the editor of the balmer island gazette, that, To reduce the number of accidents involving mopeds and pedestrians, the town council of Balmer Island should limit the number of mopeds rented by the island's moped rental companies from 50 per day to 25 per day during the summer season.By limiting the number of rentals, the town council will attain the 50 percent annual reduction in moped accidents that was achieved last year on the neighboring island of Seaville, when Seaville's town council enforced similar limits on moped rentals.The argument is stated vague.
Firstly, if the town council of balmer island will reduce the mopeds rented by the moped companies, then May be it is the the reason that the street lights are not that good, for that reason the mopeds cannot see properly in the dark, and it cause to accident between pedestrian. Another way, is that, in summer the people will drink more alcohol as compared to other seasons, and it causes more accidents.If the town council limits the rented mopeds, then, the people may rent the cars, then it will increase the accident.
Alternately,the seavilles town council will have less tourist on that year as compared to previous, so the accidents are reduced. Or it may be the reason that the streets lights are placed new as compare to the last year. so it reduce the accidents between the moped and pedestrian.It is also possible that, the weather is not good at the night, so it reduce the mopeds to travel. and eventually it decrease in accidents.May be the mopeds are under repair due to accident caused by the previous year, so, there are less mopeds available for the rent.
In summing the above, the author stated is weak. He as not given the proper population in seavilles.In order to strengthen the argument, the author would need to provide evidence that the vast number of moped accidents on Balmer Island occur during the summer and are in fact caused by an excess number of mopeds on the streets and not other factor.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 289, Rule ID: THE_FALL_SEASON[1]
Message: Use simply 'summer'.
Suggestion: summer
...es from 50 per day to 25 per day during the summer season.By limiting the number of rentals, the ...
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Line 1, column 307, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: By
... to 25 per day during the summer season.By limiting the number of rentals, the tow...
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Line 1, column 558, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
...nforced similar limits on moped rentals.The argument is stated vague. Firstly, if ...
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Line 2, column 106, Rule ID: MAY_BE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'maybe' (=perhaps)?
Suggestion: Maybe
...eds rented by the moped companies, then May be it is the the reason that the street li...
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Line 2, column 119, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
... the moped companies, then May be it is the the reason that the street lights are not t...
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Line 2, column 119, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
... the moped companies, then May be it is the the reason that the street lights are not t...
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Line 2, column 243, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'causes'?
Suggestion: causes
...cannot see properly in the dark, and it cause to accident between pedestrian. Another...
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Line 2, column 406, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: If
...r seasons, and it causes more accidents.If the town council limits the rented mope...
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Line 3, column 12, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , the
...will increase the accident. Alternately,the seavilles town council will have less t...
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Line 3, column 222, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: So
...placed new as compare to the last year. so it reduce the accidents between the mop...
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Line 3, column 228, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'reduces'?
Suggestion: reduces
... new as compare to the last year. so it reduce the accidents between the moped and ped...
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Line 3, column 282, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: It
...idents between the moped and pedestrian.It is also possible that, the weather is n...
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Line 3, column 352, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'reduces'?
Suggestion: reduces
...weather is not good at the night, so it reduce the mopeds to travel. and eventually it...
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Line 3, column 381, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: And
...ght, so it reduce the mopeds to travel. and eventually it decrease in accidents.May...
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Line 3, column 399, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'decreases'?
Suggestion: decreases
...the mopeds to travel. and eventually it decrease in accidents.May be the mopeds are unde...
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Line 3, column 421, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: May
...and eventually it decrease in accidents.May be the mopeds are under repair due to a...
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Line 3, column 425, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (May) must be used with a third-person verb: 'is'.
Suggestion: is
...eventually it decrease in accidents.May be the mopeds are under repair due to acci...
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Line 3, column 515, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun mopeds is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...sed by the previous year, so, there are less mopeds available for the rent. In summ...
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Line 4, column 100, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: In
...iven the proper population in seavilles.In order to strengthen the argument, the a...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'first', 'firstly', 'if', 'may', 'so', 'then', 'in fact']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.269633507853 0.25644967241 105% => OK
Verbs: 0.146596858639 0.15541462614 94% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0785340314136 0.0836205057962 94% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0418848167539 0.0520304965353 81% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0235602094241 0.0272364105082 87% => OK
Prepositions: 0.133507853403 0.125424944231 106% => OK
Participles: 0.0392670157068 0.0416121511921 94% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.46667577207 2.79052419416 88% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0261780104712 0.026700313972 98% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.001811407834 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.133507853403 0.113004496875 118% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0261780104712 0.0255425247493 102% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00523560209424 0.0127820249294 41% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2014.0 2731.13054187 74% => OK
No of words: 348.0 446.07635468 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.78735632184 6.12365571057 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31911543099 4.57801047555 94% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.39367816092 0.378187486979 104% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.206896551724 0.287650121315 72% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.140804597701 0.208842608468 67% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0833333333333 0.135150697306 62% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46667577207 2.79052419416 88% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 207.018472906 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.448275862069 0.469332199767 96% => OK
Word variations: 45.548602564 52.1807786196 87% => OK
How many sentences: 9.0 20.039408867 45% => More sentences wanted.
Sentence length: 38.6666666667 23.2022227129 167% => OK
Sentence length SD: 151.018108635 57.7814097925 261% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 223.777777778 141.986410481 158% => OK
Words per sentence: 38.6666666667 23.2022227129 167% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.888888888889 0.724660767414 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 5.14285714286 78% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 3.58251231527 530% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 59.3563218391 51.9672348444 114% => OK
Elegance: 2.08641975309 1.8405768891 113% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.522517807111 0.441005458295 118% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.274178733838 0.135418324435 202% => Sentence is so close to another sentence.
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.109388660306 0.0829849096947 132% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.793142102435 0.58762219726 135% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.140822011323 0.147661913831 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.32635791806 0.193483328276 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0969673981097 0.0970749176394 100% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.601779609966 0.42659136922 141% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0776364767203 0.0774707102158 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.434708031105 0.312017818177 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0614894320491 0.0698173142475 88% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 8.33743842365 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 6.87684729064 116% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.82512315271 21% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 0.0 6.46551724138 0% => More positive topic words wanted.
Negative topic words: 8.0 5.36822660099 149% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.82389162562 35% => OK
Total topic words: 9.0 14.657635468 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6 -- The score is based on the average performance of 20,000 argument essays. This e-grader is not smart enough to check on arguments.
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