The following argument was made in a newspaper editorial:
“The autonomy of any country is based on the strength of its borders; if the number of illegal immigrants entering a country cannot be checked, both its economy and national identity are endangered. Because illegal immigrants pose such threats, every effort must be made to return them to their country of origin.”
Write a response in which you examine the stated and/or unstated assumptions of the argument. Be sure to explain how the argument depends on these assumptions and what the implications are for the argument if the assumptions prove unwarranted.
The following argument was made in a newspaper editorial:
“The autonomy of any country is based on the strength of its borders; if the number of illegal immigrants entering a country cannot be checked, both its economy and national identity are endangered. Because illegal immigrants pose such threats, every effort must be made to return them to their country of origin.”
Write a response in which you examine the stated and/or unstated assumptions of the argument. Be sure to explain how the argument depends on these assumptions and what the implications are for the argument if the assumptions prove unwarranted.
Discourse Markers used:
['if']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.254385964912 0.25644967241 99% => OK
Verbs: 0.166666666667 0.15541462614 107% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0789473684211 0.0836205057962 94% => OK
Adverbs: 0.00877192982456 0.0520304965353 17% => Some adverbs wanted.
Pronouns: 0.0438596491228 0.0272364105082 161% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.114035087719 0.125424944231 91% => OK
Participles: 0.0526315789474 0.0416121511921 126% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.99951662773 2.79052419416 107% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0263157894737 0.026700313972 99% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.001811407834 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.149122807018 0.113004496875 132% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0175438596491 0.0255425247493 69% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0263157894737 0.0127820249294 206% => Maybe 'Which' is overused. If other WH_determiners like 'Who, What, Whom, Whose...' are used too in sentences, then there are no issues.
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 632.0 2731.13054187 23% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 100.0 446.07635468 22% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.32 6.12365571057 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.16227766017 4.57801047555 69% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.43 0.378187486979 114% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.37 0.287650121315 129% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.27 0.208842608468 129% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.14 0.135150697306 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99951662773 2.79052419416 107% => OK
Unique words: 67.0 207.018472906 32% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.67 0.469332199767 143% => OK
Word variations: 55.2263441344 52.1807786196 106% => OK
How many sentences: 3.0 20.039408867 15% => More sentences wanted.
Sentence length: 33.3333333333 23.2022227129 144% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.5689453034 57.7814097925 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 210.666666667 141.986410481 148% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.3333333333 23.2022227129 144% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.333333333333 0.724660767414 46% => More Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 5.14285714286 58% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 3.58251231527 0% => OK
Readability: 70.3333333333 51.9672348444 135% => OK
Elegance: 1.92 1.8405768891 104% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.765626061639 0.441005458295 174% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.285474898495 0.135418324435 211% => Sentence is so close to another sentence.
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0346883908374 0.0829849096947 42% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.803888847175 0.58762219726 137% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.132571383951 0.147661913831 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.531298231549 0.193483328276 275% => Sentence topic similarity is too high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.309624879004 0.0970749176394 319% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.16186548746 0.42659136922 38% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0784622717153 0.0774707102158 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.487878284404 0.312017818177 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.159921571283 0.0698173142475 229% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 8.33743842365 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 6.87684729064 44% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.82512315271 0% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 0.0 6.46551724138 0% => More positive topic words wanted.
Negative topic words: 3.0 5.36822660099 56% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 2.82389162562 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 3.0 14.657635468 20% => More topic words wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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More content wanted. For issue essays, around 450 words, for argument essays, around 400 words.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 41.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.5 Out of 6 -- The score is based on the average performance of 20,000 argument essays. This e-grader is not smart enough to check on arguments.
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.