The argument proposed by the business manager is not entirely justified. Firstly it could be that over the last one year, local soccer league was played but due to the television focusing on national television, viewers complained about it and these complains would not repeat next year.
Also it is a possibility that over the last year, there was major storm that affected a part of nation but since the weather is fine now and no storms are forecasted, people would be less interested in weather news.
It is also not clear if the complains received were from many viewers or few viewers complaining many times. Hence increasing local news coverage would not substantially attract more viewers.
Further it is not clear about the reason for local businesses to cancel contracts with the company. It could be that they are getting better rates for advertisements at a different television station and changing coverage would not alter their decisions.
Lastly, it does not guarantee that increasing local coverage by compromising national coverage would increase viewership as it could be that people would be more interested in national news next year with coming presidential elections and decreasing national coverage would totally loose the point.
Hence without knowing the above points the argument made by manager is fallacious.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Also,
...omplains would not repeat next year. Also it is a possibility that over the last ...
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Suggestion:
...ility that over the last year, there was major storm that affected a part of nati...
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Suggestion: Hence,
... or few viewers complaining many times. Hence increasing local news coverage would no...
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... getting better rates for advertisements at a different television station and ch...
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Suggestion: Hence,
...erage would totally loose the point. Hence without knowing the above points the ar...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'firstly', 'hence', 'if', 'lastly', 'so']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.227074235808 0.25644967241 89% => OK
Verbs: 0.170305676856 0.15541462614 110% => OK
Adjectives: 0.131004366812 0.0836205057962 157% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0698689956332 0.0520304965353 134% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0436681222707 0.0272364105082 160% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.122270742358 0.125424944231 97% => OK
Participles: 0.056768558952 0.0416121511921 136% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.72319921296 2.79052419416 98% => OK
Infinitives: 0.00873362445415 0.026700313972 33% => Some infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0 0.001811407834 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0742358078603 0.113004496875 66% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0436681222707 0.0255425247493 171% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00873362445415 0.0127820249294 68% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1352.0 2731.13054187 50% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 215.0 446.07635468 48% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.28837209302 6.12365571057 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82921379641 4.57801047555 84% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.367441860465 0.378187486979 97% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.297674418605 0.287650121315 103% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.223255813953 0.208842608468 107% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.125581395349 0.135150697306 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72319921296 2.79052419416 98% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 207.018472906 60% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.576744186047 0.469332199767 123% => OK
Word variations: 55.0508835069 52.1807786196 106% => OK
How many sentences: 9.0 20.039408867 45% => More sentences wanted.
Sentence length: 23.8888888889 23.2022227129 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 74.3536760073 57.7814097925 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 150.222222222 141.986410481 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8888888889 23.2022227129 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.888888888889 0.724660767414 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 5.14285714286 117% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 3.58251231527 140% => OK
Readability: 53.6563307494 51.9672348444 103% => OK
Elegance: 1.43076923077 1.8405768891 78% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.30532506238 0.441005458295 69% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.120647685126 0.135418324435 89% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.069900928755 0.0829849096947 84% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.774213047827 0.58762219726 132% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.189646374525 0.147661913831 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.153604118399 0.193483328276 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0679954654053 0.0970749176394 70% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.172768486183 0.42659136922 40% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0848593413287 0.0774707102158 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181589714031 0.312017818177 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0626608644493 0.0698173142475 90% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.33743842365 36% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 6.87684729064 87% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.82512315271 0% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 3.0 6.46551724138 46% => OK
Negative topic words: 6.0 5.36822660099 112% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 2.82389162562 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 9.0 14.657635468 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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More content wanted. For issue essays, around 450 words, for argument essays, around 400 words.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 41.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.5 Out of 6 -- The score is based on the average performance of 20,000 argument essays. This e-grader is not smart enough to check on arguments.
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.