"The following was used as part of an internet advertising company's appeal to businesses: Furniture Depot employed our internet advertising company to help. Since then its sales increased by 10% over last year's totals. Furniture Depot's success demonstrates how using our internet services can increase your profitability. "
Describe how well reasoned you find this argument. In the discussion be sure to analyze the line of reasoning and the use of evidence in the argument. For example, you may need to consider what questionable assumptions underlie the thinking and what alternative explanations or counterexamples might weaken the argument's conclusion. You may also address possible changes in the argument that would make it more logically sound, and what, if anything, would help you better evaluate its conclusion.
The memo from internet advertising company implies that using their internet services increased the furniture Depot sales. The reasoning given is vague and raises many questions unanswered, and unless these questions are answered the suggestion cannot be accepted.
The reason mentioned suggests that internet services increased the Furniture Depot sales but it cannot be considered appropriate reason. The sales might have increased due to numerous discounts imposed to increase sales. Other reason might be availability of new and fashionable furniture's. Other reason might be considered can be of festivals during which sale of market booms.
The analysis of sales provides is also questionable. No information is provided of when he analysis was conducted or evaluated. This evidence is thus questionable. It is necessary to be acquaintance with time span of assessed analysis.
In general, it may be said that appeal made my internet advertising company has failed to make a convincing argument because of incomplete analytical data. The argument ends with an entirely optimistic conclusion this is likely to be incorrect.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...d the suggestion cannot be accepted. The reason mentioned suggests that internet...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...annot be considered appropriate reason. The sales might have increased due to numer...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'may', 'so', 'thus', 'in general']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.256684491979 0.25644967241 100% => OK
Verbs: 0.224598930481 0.15541462614 145% => OK
Adjectives: 0.112299465241 0.0836205057962 134% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0267379679144 0.0520304965353 51% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0320855614973 0.0272364105082 118% => OK
Prepositions: 0.0909090909091 0.125424944231 72% => OK
Participles: 0.0748663101604 0.0416121511921 180% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.02202849125 2.79052419416 108% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0267379679144 0.026700313972 100% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.001811407834 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0802139037433 0.113004496875 71% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0374331550802 0.0255425247493 147% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0106951871658 0.0127820249294 84% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1133.0 2731.13054187 41% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 171.0 446.07635468 38% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.62573099415 6.12365571057 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61617157096 4.57801047555 79% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.450292397661 0.378187486979 119% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.362573099415 0.287650121315 126% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.327485380117 0.208842608468 157% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.210526315789 0.135150697306 156% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02202849125 2.79052419416 108% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 207.018472906 53% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.637426900585 0.469332199767 136% => OK
Word variations: 61.2419114445 52.1807786196 117% => OK
How many sentences: 12.0 20.039408867 60% => OK
Sentence length: 14.25 23.2022227129 61% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.8804922238 57.7814097925 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.4166666667 141.986410481 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.25 23.2022227129 61% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.5 0.724660767414 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 5.14285714286 78% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 3.58251231527 56% => OK
Readability: 50.5073099415 51.9672348444 97% => OK
Elegance: 1.49056603774 1.8405768891 81% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220931782011 0.441005458295 50% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.123632570727 0.135418324435 91% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0767654752265 0.0829849096947 93% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.581684929088 0.58762219726 99% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.093899275958 0.147661913831 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0879979958818 0.193483328276 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0797459787121 0.0970749176394 82% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.196443035652 0.42659136922 46% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0399989525256 0.0774707102158 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138624357857 0.312017818177 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0435467664186 0.0698173142475 62% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.33743842365 60% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 6.87684729064 73% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.82512315271 41% => OK
Positive topic words: 5.0 6.46551724138 77% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 5.36822660099 75% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.82389162562 35% => OK
Total topic words: 10.0 14.657635468 68% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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More content wanted. For issue essays, around 450 words, for argument essays, around 400 words.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 41.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.5 Out of 6 -- The score is based on the average performance of 20,000 argument essays. This e-grader is not smart enough to check on arguments.
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.