“Manned space flight is costly and dangerous. Moreover, the recent success of a series of unmanned space probes and satellites has demonstrated that a great deal of useful information can be gathered without the costs and risks associated with sending men and women into space. Therefore, we should invest our resources in unmanned space flight."
The editor of a national aeronautics magazine have made this argument based on some important assumptions. Let us discuss them in detail and study how those assumptions will effect the given argument.
The editor has stated that the manned space flight is costly but he has not specifically mentioned the exact cost of the flight. He has also stated that the unmanned space flight costs lesser compared to manned space flight but he failed to specify that on what basis the cost is determined. It might be possible the unmanned space flight might have high maintenance cost. Thus if the maintenance cost is very high for unmanned space flight it might result in more money being spend after the flight had taken off.
Author had also failed to compare the overall performance of the both the space flights. It might be possible that the information obtained from the unmanned space flight is comparatively less accurate than manned space flight. Thus if such is the case then the investment in unmanned space flight becomes skeptical. The author also have not mentioned about the durability of the manned flight and have assumed that it is proportionate with the manned space flight.
However editor also strengthen his argument by mentioning about the safety factor associated with both the flights. We have seen many accidents occurring in the past where several astronauts have sacrificed their life for the development of field of science. Thus an unmanned space flight will be less risky.
Thus the argument made by the editor could have been strengthened by adding more information and statistics about the overall cost of both the flights and the reliability and durability of the unmanned flight.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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The editor of a national aeronautics mag...
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...ions will effect the given argument. The editor has stated that the manned sp...
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...light might have high maintenance cost. Thus if the maintenance cost is very high fo...
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...pend after the flight had taken off. Author had also failed to compare the ov...
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...less accurate than manned space flight. Thus if such is the case then the investment...
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...ionate with the manned space flight. However editor also strengthen his argum...
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...ned space flight will be less risky. Thus the argument made by the editor cou...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'however', 'if', 'so', 'then', 'thus']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.239864864865 0.25644967241 94% => OK
Verbs: 0.192567567568 0.15541462614 124% => OK
Adjectives: 0.108108108108 0.0836205057962 129% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0506756756757 0.0520304965353 97% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0405405405405 0.0272364105082 149% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.111486486486 0.125424944231 89% => OK
Participles: 0.0743243243243 0.0416121511921 179% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.59207245184 2.79052419416 93% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0101351351351 0.026700313972 38% => Some infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.00337837837838 0.001811407834 187% => OK
Determiners: 0.138513513514 0.113004496875 123% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0236486486486 0.0255425247493 93% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0101351351351 0.0127820249294 79% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1776.0 2731.13054187 65% => OK
No of words: 282.0 446.07635468 63% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.29787234043 6.12365571057 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.57801047555 90% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.351063829787 0.378187486979 93% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.230496453901 0.287650121315 80% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.18085106383 0.208842608468 87% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.109929078014 0.135150697306 81% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59207245184 2.79052419416 93% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 207.018472906 65% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.475177304965 0.469332199767 101% => OK
Word variations: 45.542613413 52.1807786196 87% => OK
How many sentences: 14.0 20.039408867 70% => OK
Sentence length: 20.1428571429 23.2022227129 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.9167740971 57.7814097925 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.857142857 141.986410481 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1428571429 23.2022227129 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.5 0.724660767414 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.14285714286 97% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 3.58251231527 307% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 43.1925025329 51.9672348444 83% => OK
Elegance: 1.5 1.8405768891 81% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.424146047639 0.441005458295 96% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.162023920021 0.135418324435 120% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.136934287426 0.0829849096947 165% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.667747243752 0.58762219726 114% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.154343177898 0.147661913831 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.197017227135 0.193483328276 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0877176453938 0.0970749176394 90% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.412928984018 0.42659136922 97% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.189628035215 0.0774707102158 245% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.278459624542 0.312017818177 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0923083236757 0.0698173142475 132% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.33743842365 24% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 6.87684729064 116% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.82512315271 83% => OK
Positive topic words: 2.0 6.46551724138 31% => OK
Negative topic words: 5.0 5.36822660099 93% => OK
Neutral topic words: 4.0 2.82389162562 142% => OK
Total topic words: 11.0 14.657635468 75% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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More content wanted. For issue essays, around 450 words, for argument essays, around 400 words.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6 -- The score is based on the average performance of 20,000 argument essays. This e-grader is not smart enough to check on arguments.
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