Nature's Way, a chain of stores selling health food and other health-related products, is opening its next franchise in the town of Plainsville. The store should prove to be very successful: Nature's Way franchises tend to be most profitable in areas where residents lead healthy lives, and clearly Plainsville is such an area. Plainsville merchants report that sales of running shoes and exercise clothing are at all-time highs. The local health club has more members than ever, and the weight training and aerobics classes are always full. Finally, Plainsville's schoolchildren represent a new generation of potential customers: these schoolchildren are required to participate in a fitness-for-life program, which emphasizes the benefits of regular exercise at an early age.
Write a response in which you examine the stated and/or unstated assumptions of the argument. Be sure to explain how the argument depends on these assumptions and what the implications are for the argument if the assumptions prove unwarranted.
Nature's Way, a chain stores claim is argued to be successful in a healthy cautious area like plainsville. This chain claims to be successfull on the health centric attitude in people of Plainsville. Assumptions that are stated in the argument are raising dought on success of Nature's Way. These assumptions are not clearly stated and considering single side of the situation. By this assumptions and planning according to them may lead to undesirable results.
Primary assumption that sales of products related to health in an area like Plainsville where the residents lead a healthy lives, may be alarming. Because readily residents are enthusiastic and knowledgable about health, which suggests they are fit and healthy. Consiquently these individuals do not need any health products related to medication and machines related to sickness or treatment, other products like proteins shakes and multi-vitamins are preffered by health cautious individuals they preffer making them naturally and there is information available for them on internet. So predicting success on this basis is not pragmatic.
Another assumption in the argument states that health club has more members than ever and aerobicsand weight trainig centers are always full. In contrary it is seen that products related to exercise like running shoes and exercise clothing have higher sales than ever, No evidance is found to support sales of health foods and related procucts. As is seen in the argument the products sold heavily are personal items like shoes and clothes but not gym equipment which are available at gyms and health centers, so it can be seen that health products that are not personal are predicted to fail in this market. The data presented is partial and does not strongly supports the specific products sold by Nature's Way.
Thirdly, author states that school children who are required to participate in a fitness for life program as new generation of potential customers. But these children may not be aware of such products and they are taught about exercise as a means of fitness and health. which makes it clear that they cannot be mustered up to make a potential customers.
In a nut shell, Plainsville cannot be a successful market place for Nature's way to establish its next franchise. The assumptions are found to be fair, under scrutinizing them it is seen that assumptions taken into consideration are incomplete and flawed
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ille where the residents lead a healthy lives, may be alarming. Because readily resid...
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...cific products sold by Natures Way. Thirdly, author states that school child...
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...nnot be mustered up to make a potential customers. In a nut shell, Plainsville cannot...
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'if', 'may', 'so', 'third', 'thirdly', 'thus']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.261904761905 0.25644967241 102% => OK
Verbs: 0.202380952381 0.15541462614 130% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0904761904762 0.0836205057962 108% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0452380952381 0.0520304965353 87% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0309523809524 0.0272364105082 114% => OK
Prepositions: 0.12380952381 0.125424944231 99% => OK
Participles: 0.0738095238095 0.0416121511921 177% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.84140962423 2.79052419416 102% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0333333333333 0.026700313972 125% => OK
Particles: 0.00238095238095 0.001811407834 131% => OK
Determiners: 0.0690476190476 0.113004496875 61% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0142857142857 0.0255425247493 56% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0166666666667 0.0127820249294 130% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2439.0 2731.13054187 89% => OK
No of words: 392.0 446.07635468 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.22193877551 6.12365571057 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44960558625 4.57801047555 97% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.40306122449 0.378187486979 107% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.321428571429 0.287650121315 112% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.232142857143 0.208842608468 111% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.135204081633 0.135150697306 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84140962423 2.79052419416 102% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 207.018472906 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.469332199767 107% => OK
Word variations: 54.3716815584 52.1807786196 104% => OK
How many sentences: 18.0 20.039408867 90% => OK
Sentence length: 21.7777777778 23.2022227129 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.8290903462 57.7814097925 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.5 141.986410481 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7777777778 23.2022227129 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.388888888889 0.724660767414 54% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.14285714286 97% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 3.58251231527 223% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 53.9206349206 51.9672348444 104% => OK
Elegance: 1.64957264957 1.8405768891 90% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.373631258628 0.441005458295 85% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.131465083396 0.135418324435 97% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0783174011379 0.0829849096947 94% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.525928099736 0.58762219726 90% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.132152901643 0.147661913831 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.152663944927 0.193483328276 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0770280521815 0.0970749176394 79% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.312368328433 0.42659136922 73% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0890070768479 0.0774707102158 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.253588416896 0.312017818177 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0541084816599 0.0698173142475 78% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.33743842365 132% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 6.87684729064 87% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.82512315271 21% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 9.0 6.46551724138 139% => OK
Negative topic words: 5.0 5.36822660099 93% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.82389162562 35% => OK
Total topic words: 15.0 14.657635468 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6 -- The score is based on the average performance of 20,000 argument essays. This e-grader is not smart enough to check on arguments.
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