night shows local or nation?

Essay topics:

night shows local or nation?

This argue is mainly associated with the news program , in which author argue that the number of local news are decreased by the national news in the night. As we know that mosf of the people are prefer to watch teliviaion shows aor news show in the late night, becuase most of the people are busy in their day schedule.Author argue that over the past years late night news program devoted increased time to national news and less time to weather and local news.

Firstly,as we saw that news program devoted increased time to national news rather than the local or weather news. Becuase of this problem in that period most of the complaints received from the viewers , who were concerned with the station's coverage of weather and local news. And it is necessity to know about the local news of weather and local news.

Secondly, author said that local businesses that used to advertise during the late night news program had canceled their advertising contract with news program because of in that time news program devoted increased time to national news and less time to weather and local news.As we know if news program will not give time to local news they will be in loss and they will canceled their contract which is an obvious thing.

By devoted more time to national news the viewers of the the local news will reduce to great level. Therefore in order to attract more viewers to the program and to avoid losing any further advertising revenues, we should restore the time devoted to weather and local news to its former level.And it will bring the same number of viewers back to the program.

Finally,we conclude that if we divide same amount of time to both national as well as to local news there will not any problem is going to occur becuase national as well as local news are important to know all the people of the nation and it will help the people to know the all the information related nation's weather as well as all business related news.

The optimum solution of this problem is we have to devide same time to both news and the we will prevent further advertising revenues.And we can remain same number of views for both the type of news.

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Average: 5 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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... of views for both the type of news.
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Discourse Markers used:
['finally', 'first', 'firstly', 'if', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'therefore', 'well', 'as to', 'as well as']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.261728395062 0.25644967241 102% => OK
Verbs: 0.145679012346 0.15541462614 94% => OK
Adjectives: 0.106172839506 0.0836205057962 127% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0444444444444 0.0520304965353 85% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0469135802469 0.0272364105082 172% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.116049382716 0.125424944231 93% => OK
Participles: 0.0345679012346 0.0416121511921 83% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.25772019015 2.79052419416 81% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0592592592593 0.026700313972 222% => Less infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0 0.001811407834 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.103703703704 0.113004496875 92% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0246913580247 0.0255425247493 97% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00987654320988 0.0127820249294 77% => OK

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2179.0 2731.13054187 80% => OK
No of words: 388.0 446.07635468 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.61597938144 6.12365571057 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43821085614 4.57801047555 97% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.286082474227 0.378187486979 76% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.216494845361 0.287650121315 75% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.10824742268 0.208842608468 52% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0618556701031 0.135150697306 46% => More words length more than 8 chars wanted.
Word Length SD: 2.25772019015 2.79052419416 81% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 207.018472906 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.368556701031 0.469332199767 79% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 38.5026879042 52.1807786196 74% => OK
How many sentences: 10.0 20.039408867 50% => More sentences wanted.
Sentence length: 38.8 23.2022227129 167% => OK
Sentence length SD: 110.457457874 57.7814097925 191% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 217.9 141.986410481 153% => OK
Words per sentence: 38.8 23.2022227129 167% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.1 0.724660767414 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 5.14285714286 117% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 3.58251231527 502% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 60.4494845361 51.9672348444 116% => OK
Elegance: 1.73958333333 1.8405768891 95% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.103220523604 0.441005458295 23% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.299395494365 0.135418324435 221% => Sentence is so close to another sentence.
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0963584133239 0.0829849096947 116% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.855687584618 0.58762219726 146% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.126218088924 0.147661913831 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0630089768458 0.193483328276 33% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0349201466684 0.0970749176394 36% => The sentences are too close to each other.
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.485055633457 0.42659136922 114% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0878675507564 0.0774707102158 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0629105240413 0.312017818177 20% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0376281640779 0.0698173142475 54% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.33743842365 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 6.87684729064 29% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.82512315271 41% => OK
Positive topic words: 6.0 6.46551724138 93% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 5.36822660099 37% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.82389162562 71% => OK
Total topic words: 10.0 14.657635468 68% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6 -- The score is based on the average performance of 20,000 argument essays. This e-grader is not smart enough to check on arguments.
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