Over the past year, our late-night news program has devoted increased time to national news and less time to weather and local news. During this time period, most of the complaints received from viewers were concerned with our station's coverage of weather and local news. In addition, local businesses that used to advertise during our late-night news program have just canceled their advertising contracts with us. Therefore, in order to attract more viewers to the program and to avoid losing any further advertising revenues, we should restore the time devoted to weather and local news to its former leve
In authors argument that government of MAson City should devote more money in this year's budget to riverside recreational facilities as the use of river for water sports is sure to inccrease is flawed.In the argument, the author not only draws conclusion based on asssumptions about the use of water but also resident's liking of water sports.Furthermore,the author makes the mistake of considering the response of some people as the response of whole population of city.
To begin with,the conclusion is largely based on the perception that according to the survey which was conducted water sports like swimming,boating and fishing are among the favorite recreational activities of the residents of Mason City.The author has failed to provide evidence of when the survey was taken,the survey was conducted for how many people, or people what age group etc.Also the author has assumed the response of only those number of people to be the response of every other resident of Mason City.
Secondly,the author has made the assumption that the complaints of people regarding river water's smell and quality are so that the government cleans up and they can do recreational activities.No where he has mentioned about the real reson their complaints.People might be complaining so that they can use the water for construction of dam. To add to this,the author assumes that the state has recently announced plans to clean up Mason River in response to the complaints of the people.But he has not shown any proof of this.The authority might have taken the decision due to some other reason like the pressure from the higher authority or for their other motives.
The argument can be strengthened if the author provides information regading the survey conducted and the responses.Also a proof of the real reason for the government's decision to clean up the river water.As it stands however,the argument is flawed for the reasons indicated.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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... MAson City should devote more money in this years budget to riverside recreational ...
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...r sports is sure to inccrease is flawed.In the argument, the author not only draws...
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...t also residents liking of water sports.Furthermore,the author makes the mistake of conside...
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...dents liking of water sports.Furthermore,the author makes the mistake of considering...
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...le population of city. To begin with,the conclusion is largely based on the perc...
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...tivities of the residents of Mason City.The author has failed to provide evidence o...
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...de evidence of when the survey was taken,the survey was conducted for how many peopl...
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...ny people, or people what age group etc.Also the author has assumed the response of ...
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...of every other resident of Mason City. Secondly,the author has made the assumpt...
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...r resident of Mason City. Secondly,the author has made the assumption that the...
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...and they can do recreational activities.No where he has mentioned about the real r...
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...and they can do recreational activities.No where he has mentioned about the real r...
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...d about the real reson their complaints.People might be complaining so that they can u...
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...or construction of dam. To add to this,the author assumes that the state has recen...
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...esponse to the complaints of the people.But he has not shown any proof of this.The ...
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....But he has not shown any proof of this.The authority might have taken the decision...
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... the survey conducted and the responses.Also a proof of the real reason for the gove...
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...ts decision to clean up the river water.As it stands however,the argument is flawe...
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... up the river water.As it stands however,the argument is flawed for the reasons indi...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'furthermore', 'however', 'if', 'regarding', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'then', 'to begin with']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.289552238806 0.25644967241 113% => OK
Verbs: 0.185074626866 0.15541462614 119% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0477611940299 0.0836205057962 57% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0298507462687 0.0520304965353 57% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0208955223881 0.0272364105082 77% => OK
Prepositions: 0.14328358209 0.125424944231 114% => OK
Participles: 0.0626865671642 0.0416121511921 151% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.05215360167 2.79052419416 109% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0358208955224 0.026700313972 134% => OK
Particles: 0.0089552238806 0.001811407834 494% => OK
Determiners: 0.14328358209 0.113004496875 127% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0179104477612 0.0255425247493 70% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0149253731343 0.0127820249294 117% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1942.0 2731.13054187 71% => OK
No of words: 314.0 446.07635468 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.1847133758 6.12365571057 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.57801047555 92% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.350318471338 0.378187486979 93% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.254777070064 0.287650121315 89% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.222929936306 0.208842608468 107% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.146496815287 0.135150697306 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05215360167 2.79052419416 109% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 207.018472906 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.469332199767 107% => OK
Word variations: 50.5092055002 52.1807786196 97% => OK
How many sentences: 5.0 20.039408867 25% => More sentences wanted.
Sentence length: 62.8 23.2022227129 271% => Sentence lengths are too long.
Sentence length SD: 91.0199978027 57.7814097925 158% => OK
Chars per sentence: 388.4 141.986410481 274% => Less chars per sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 62.8 23.2022227129 271% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 2.2 0.724660767414 304% => Less Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 5.14285714286 78% => OK
Language errors: 22.0 3.58251231527 614% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 88.2777070064 51.9672348444 170% => OK
Elegance: 2.10126582278 1.8405768891 114% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.268930099615 0.441005458295 61% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.409496002083 0.135418324435 302% => Sentence is so close to another sentence.
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0704035019827 0.0829849096947 85% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.931751539369 0.58762219726 159% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.0854076384477 0.147661913831 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.206199364538 0.193483328276 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0302864115026 0.0970749176394 31% => The sentences are too close to each other.
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.595717224169 0.42659136922 140% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0158305719743 0.0774707102158 20% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.215897438528 0.312017818177 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0299950484889 0.0698173142475 43% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.33743842365 48% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 6.87684729064 15% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.82512315271 0% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 4.0 6.46551724138 62% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 5.36822660099 19% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 0.0 2.82389162562 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 5.0 14.657635468 34% => More topic words wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6 -- The score is based on the average performance of 20,000 argument essays. This e-grader is not smart enough to check on arguments.
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