Over the past year, our late-night news program has devoted increasingly more time to covering national news and less time to covering weather and local news. During the same time period, most of the complaints we received from viewers were concerned with the station's coverage of weather and local news. In addition, several local businesses that used to run advertisements during our late-night news program have just cancelled their advertising contracts with us. Therefore, in order to attract more viewers to our news programs and to avoid losing any further advertising revenues, we should expand the coverage of weather and local news on all our news programs.
Recently, late news program has devoted increased time to national news and less time to weather and local news.The author has concluded that to attract more viewers and to avoid advertising revenues, the time devoted to weather and local news should be restored to the previous level.However this is not a legitimate conclusion to the stated facts because of the nature of the complaints towards the news as well as the reason of the cancellation of the local businesses are unknown.
The daily viewers have complained to the news station's coverage of weather and local news has made the author to assume that the complaints are related to the less time allocated to the weather and local news. This assumption might be wrong because the viewers complaint may be based on the fact that the weather and local news that are shown might not stress on the important facts but lay ground on the local news irrelevant to the present scenario in the town.
Another major assumption by the author is that local businesses have cancelled their contracts due to the time devoted to local news. However they might be a variety of reasons which are not mentioned in the passage including a relocation of the local businesses due to the more profitable nature of a nearby place. Therefore they might have to change and relocate all the resources to another place including the advertisments of their products to suit their needs. The businesses might have gone to bankruptcy due to the adverse conditions and un-availability of basic resources needed to run it.
The interlinking of the complaints recieved and the local businesses cancelling the contracts cannot be attributed to the decrease in time of weather and local news with the stated facts. More research has to be done to unearth the important facts about the local establishments as well as the complaints recived from the viewers to come to a conclusion rather than just giving out a reason on it.
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...local news has made the author to assume that the complaints are related to the l...
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...he weather and local news that are shown might not stress on the important facts ...
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...needs. The businesses might have gone to bankruptcy due to the adverse conditions...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, may, so, therefore, well, as to, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 19.6327345309 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.9520958084 62% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 11.1786427146 107% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 13.6137724551 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 28.8173652695 49% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 55.5748502994 90% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 16.3942115768 24% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1629.0 2260.96107784 72% => OK
No of words: 331.0 441.139720559 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92145015106 5.12650576532 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.56307096286 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73456457104 2.78398813304 98% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 204.123752495 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.416918429003 0.468620217663 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 509.4 705.55239521 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59920159681 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.96107784431 20% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.471057884232 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 8.76447105788 57% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.70958083832 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.22255489022 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 19.7664670659 46% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 36.0 22.8473053892 158% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 102.299970433 57.8364921388 177% => OK
Chars per sentence: 181.0 119.503703932 151% => OK
Words per sentence: 36.7777777778 23.324526521 158% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 5.70786347227 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 5.15768463074 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 11.0 5.25449101796 209% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.20758483034 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 6.88822355289 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.67664670659 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.366842508015 0.218282227539 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.166677780821 0.0743258471296 224% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.149213969056 0.0701772020484 213% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.263325021696 0.128457276422 205% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.133153065318 0.0628817314937 212% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.1 14.3799401198 140% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.4 48.3550499002 90% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.1628742515 156% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 12.197005988 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.85 12.5979740519 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 8.32208582834 102% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 98.500998004 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 28.0 12.3882235529 226% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 16.4 11.1389221557 147% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.9071856287 101% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6 -- The score is based on the average performance of 20,000 argument essays. This e-grader is not smart enough to check on arguments.
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