Pleasantville school should institute a program to complete 40 hours of community service
Here the passage talking about several charitable organizations in Pleasantville.which provides the opportunities for teenages to engage in community service.they describes the shortage of teenages who participated in community services.and the main problem is a number of teenage volunteers has declined to participate.To increase the awareness of community services in teenagers,the Pleasantville School Board arrange a program for community service prior to graduation.
My argument point is why only teenagers are required to aware about community service?.No dought it is very important thing that community service would provide much-needed assistance to worthy local charities and would also help young people understand the importance of giving back to their community.
Second argument is why they mention "Requiring high school students" only?.Teachers,parents and othe community member should also participate in such a generous activity.It can be done by small childers to oldage people.there is no age for the kind activity.
Another thing is why all charitable organization provide opportunity for teenagers?,it can be provide to all human being.whover wants to take opportunity to participate in community service ,they tak.why should they have this criteria.
I agree that teenagers should aware about the advantage of community services but not only teenagers.For better future and make the world generous , all the people of should aware about the advantages of community services.and should also participate in such a nice act.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ges to engage in community service.they describes the shortage of teenages who participat...
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... volunteers has declined to participate.To increase the awareness of community ser...
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...eness of community services in teenagers,the Pleasantville School Board arrange a pr...
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...eenagers,the Pleasantville School Board arrange a program for community service prior t...
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... community service prior to graduation. My argument point is why only teenagers ...
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...uired to aware about community service?.No dought it is very important thing that ...
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...ance of giving back to their community. Second argument is why they mention &apo...
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...uiring high school students' only?.Teachers,parents and othe community member shoul...
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...igh school students' only?.Teachers,parents and othe community member should also p...
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...participate in such a generous activity.It can be done by small childers to oldage...
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....there is no age for the kind activity. Another thing is why all charitable orga...
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...ation provide opportunity for teenagers?,it can be provide to all human being.whove...
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...nity to participate in community service ,they tak.why should they have this crite...
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... service ,they tak.why should they have this criteria. I agree that teenage...
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...tak.why should they have this criteria. I agree that teenagers should aware abou...
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...mmunity services but not only teenagers.For better future and make the world genero...
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...etter future and make the world generous , all the people of should aware about th...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'second', 'so', 'another thing', 'talking about']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.293172690763 0.25644967241 114% => OK
Verbs: 0.180722891566 0.15541462614 116% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0803212851406 0.0836205057962 96% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0401606425703 0.0520304965353 77% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0321285140562 0.0272364105082 118% => OK
Prepositions: 0.0963855421687 0.125424944231 77% => OK
Participles: 0.0240963855422 0.0416121511921 58% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.59035012039 2.79052419416 129% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0401606425703 0.026700313972 150% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.001811407834 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0843373493976 0.113004496875 75% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0361445783133 0.0255425247493 142% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0200803212851 0.0127820249294 157% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1590.0 2731.13054187 58% => OK
No of words: 226.0 446.07635468 51% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 7.03539823009 6.12365571057 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87727950738 4.57801047555 85% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.455752212389 0.378187486979 121% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.371681415929 0.287650121315 129% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.300884955752 0.208842608468 144% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.238938053097 0.135150697306 177% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.59035012039 2.79052419416 129% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 207.018472906 65% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.592920353982 0.469332199767 126% => OK
Word variations: 58.8815641863 52.1807786196 113% => OK
How many sentences: 5.0 20.039408867 25% => More sentences wanted.
Sentence length: 45.2 23.2022227129 195% => Sentence lengths are too long.
Sentence length SD: 83.8164661627 57.7814097925 145% => OK
Chars per sentence: 318.0 141.986410481 224% => Less chars per sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 45.2 23.2022227129 195% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 1.2 0.724660767414 166% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.14285714286 97% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 3.58251231527 475% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 82.3681415929 51.9672348444 159% => OK
Elegance: 1.63492063492 1.8405768891 89% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.283813184304 0.441005458295 64% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.190151530948 0.135418324435 140% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0407126077973 0.0829849096947 49% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 1.0 0.58762219726 170% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 2.67377111092e-16 0.147661913831 0% => Sentences are similar to each other in a paragraph.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.168746156821 0.193483328276 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0584038736645 0.0970749176394 60% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.202715457099 0.42659136922 48% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0653176660076 0.0774707102158 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168746156821 0.312017818177 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0584038736645 0.0698173142475 84% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.33743842365 60% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 6.87684729064 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.82512315271 0% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 5.0 6.46551724138 77% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 5.36822660099 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 0.0 2.82389162562 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 5.0 14.657635468 34% => More topic words wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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More content wanted. For issue essays, around 450 words, for argument essays, around 400 words.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 41.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.5 Out of 6 -- The score is based on the average performance of 20,000 argument essays. This e-grader is not smart enough to check on arguments.
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