In any field of endeavour, it is impossible to make a significant contribution without first being strongly influenced by the past achievements with in that field.
Any person should be allowed to pursue in the field, in which he is interested. Only then he will be able to concentrate and prove himself, since he is pursuing his passion. Before getting into the field, he will have aspirations to become like a person who has achieved tremendously in that particular field. This implicitly means that, it is not possible to make significant contribution without being influenced by the past achievements.
Let us consider an example, in my neighbourhood there is a child whose aspiration is to be a cricketer, he always says that he wants to become like The Great Sachin Tendulkar, actually instead of saying he wants to pursue cricket as career, he will say i want to be like Sachin Tendulkar one day, this shows how much influenced that kid is by the achievements Sachin has made in the field.
Let it be any person, whether he wants to be a dancer or photographer or singer or director or actor, he is always, inspired and motivated by the achievements that people made in that field. is there a dancer? who do not admires Micheal Jackson or who do not aspire to be like him, it is impossible, he is a legend everyone aspires to be like him, this is what pushes them hard to achieve more.
Summarising it, Let it be any person consider Sachin, he has also admired Bradman, Viv Richerds. One day,he wants to achieve like them now,he has achieved beyond them. Thus it may be any field a person can not make achievements without being influenced by past achievements.
Sentence: Let it be any person, whether he wants to be a dancer or photographer or singer or director or actor, he is always, inspired and motivated by the achievements that people made in that field. is there a dancer? who do not admires Micheal Jackson or who do not aspire to be like him, it is impossible, he is a legend everyone aspires to be like him, this is what pushes them hard to achieve more.
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Suggestion: Refer to admires and Micheal
Sentence: Summarising it, Let it be any person consider Sachin, he has also admired Bradman, Viv Richerds.
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Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace consider with verb, past tense
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