Governments Should Education Free Of Charge
The goal of the education is not only educate the people but also to make contribution in the progress of the society.Thus fulfilling that objective education should be free for all. So that everybody in the society should be benifited from that. Thus the given statement is agreable and justified to me.
College and university are the main knowledge hub of the society and the country. It is where education is worshipped. If the education is charged in college and university then only few upper class of the society will be benfited from it and the backward people who actually need of education will be lacking the right of education. Thus there will be gradually distances between differnent classes of society. With education comes the progress in the country in every sector.
So indirectly it will be benifited to the government as the free education will gurantee the progress of the society, decreasing the social barrier. However free education doesnot imply that automatically all will take the advantage of it. Free education is just a step to encourage all the people in the society to take part in it. To ensure that all will take the advantage of the free education Government must take other step otherwise there will be no advantage at all. For example if the lower class in the society left uneducated from the very beginning of then they have very little interest to send their children to school or college inspite of the free education. So Government should ensure that they took part in the education. Then only this nobel ojective of the government should be full filled.
Sentence: Thus there will be gradually distances between differnent classes of society.
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Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace gradually with adjective
Sentence: So that everybody in the society should be benifited from that.
Error: benifited Suggestion: benefited
Sentence: Thus the given statement is agreable and justified to me.
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Sentence: Thus there will be gradually distances between differnent classes of society.
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Sentence: So indirectly it will be benifited to the government as the free education will gurantee the progress of the society, decreasing the social barrier.
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Error: benifited Suggestion: benefited
Sentence: However free education doesnot imply that automatically all will take the advantage of it.
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Sentence: Then only this nobel ojective of the government should be full filled.
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Error: nobel Suggestion: noble
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Score: 3.0 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 7 2
No. of Sentences: 15 15
No. of Words: 273 350
No. of Characters: 1306 1500
No. of Different Words: 125 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.065 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.784 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.609 2.4
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No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 76 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 53 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 42 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 18.2 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 9.806 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.667 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.39 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.517 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.1 0.07
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