Many people admire idealism, but it usually leads to disappointment or trouble
Wether to follow an idealistic or pragmatic approach has been a long held debate not just for an individual but also for insitutions,organizations and every other place where decision is involved. But the situation is still preplexing wether to follow the ideal way or to challenge the traditional decisons and strive on your own in practical way. Since childhood ideal thoughts are instilled in our minds and to we are brought up idolizing our seniors. So the notion of following the ideal and conceptual way is nurtured in minds right from childhood but often an idealist is seen muddled in making decisions where prudent and realsitic approach is demanded.
People in their various walks of occupation, business, education etc always yearns for success and try to be idealistic because it promises them of danger-free zone confined within ideal thoughts. Very few posses the temerity to face the obstacles of practical lifestyle.Idealism on the contarary seems plausible because there is sure gauranteed success as the approach has been adopted ,tested and tried
over the years. But if often fails to compete in the practical scenario as resources, conditions, deadlines and pressure ceases one's effort to be ideal and usually results in disappointment and discomfit. Assumption held in ideal situations are hardly in congurence with real life situations and so this tends to failure resulting in loss of enthusiasm and anxiety.
Pragmatic approach requires lot of courage since the approach has never been experimented and it requires one to premeditate and analyze the conditions and work accordingly.It takes lot of diligence and arduous effort to walk along the off traded path. As an illustrative example if company is facing a loss in a product because of increased competition then idealistic approach would suggest reducing the cost of commodity and delivering best quality.Now quality and cost have direct proportion and so acheiving idealism results in dilemma. Pracitcal attitude in this scenario would be to study the competitor , analyze the market trends and accordingly make aggressive advertisements and promotions keeping other factors constant whcich would result in better market capitalization. History is the evidence of the fact that pragmatist have been able to chase the desired results and reach the zenith of success by being politic rather than ideal and ethical. The engineer who studies his model in ideal situation will sought to make the ideal design but practical approach would require him to study his design in all inclement weather. This practical approach is neccessary to make improptu decisions and situations where ideal thoughts and actions does not suffice.
In this competitive world being ideal is what every individual , organizaion, venture aims to achieve but pragmatism is required to survive. Ideal approach may seem the best but prudent thinking is required in response to variation and achieveing realistic goals.
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Sentence: Wether to follow an idealistic or pragmatic approach has been a long held debate not just for an individual but also for insitutions,organizations and every other place where decision is involved.
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Sentence: But the situation is still preplexing wether to follow the ideal way or to challenge the traditional decisons and strive on your own in practical way.
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Sentence: Since childhood ideal thoughts are instilled in our minds and to we are brought up idolizing our seniors.
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Sentence: So the notion of following the ideal and conceptual way is nurtured in minds right from childhood but often an idealist is seen muddled in making decisions where prudent and realsitic approach is demanded.
Error: realsitic Suggestion: realistic
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Sentence: People in their various walks of occupation, business, education etc always yearns for success and try to be idealistic because it promises them of danger-free zone confined within ideal thoughts.
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Sentence: Very few posses the temerity to face the obstacles of practical lifestyle.Idealism on the contarary seems plausible because there is sure gauranteed success as the approach has been adopted ,tested and tried over the years.
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Sentence: But if often fails to compete in the practical scenario as resources, conditions, deadlines and pressure ceases one's effort to be ideal and usually results in disappointment and discomfit.
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Sentence: Assumption held in ideal situations are hardly in congurence with real life situations and so this tends to failure resulting in loss of enthusiasm and anxiety.
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Sentence: Pragmatic approach requires lot of courage since the approach has never been experimented and it requires one to premeditate and analyze the conditions and work accordingly.It takes lot of diligence and arduous effort to walk along the off traded path.
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Sentence: As an illustrative example if company is facing a loss in a product because of increased competition then idealistic approach would suggest reducing the cost of commodity and delivering best quality.Now quality and cost have direct proportion and so acheiving idealism results in dilemma.
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Sentence: Pracitcal attitude in this scenario would be to study the competitor , analyze the market trends and accordingly make aggressive advertisements and promotions keeping other factors constant whcich would result in better market capitalization.
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Sentence: History is the evidence of the fact that pragmatist have been able to chase the desired results and reach the zenith of success by being politic rather than ideal and ethical.
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Sentence: The engineer who studies his model in ideal situation will sought to make the ideal design but practical approach would require him to study his design in all inclement weather.
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Sentence: This practical approach is neccessary to make improptu decisions and situations where ideal thoughts and actions does not suffice.
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Sentence: In this competitive world being ideal is what every individual , organizaion, venture aims to achieve but pragmatism is required to survive.
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Sentence: Ideal approach may seem the best but prudent thinking is required in response to variation and achieveing realistic goals.
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Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.094 0.07
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Sentence: Wether to follow an idealistic or pragmatic approach has been a long held debate not just for an individual but also for insitutions,organizations and every other place where decision is involved.
No grammatical errors
Sentence: But the situation is still preplexing wether to follow the ideal way or to challenge the traditional decisons and strive on your own in practical way.
No grammatical errors
Sentence: Since childhood ideal thoughts are instilled in our minds and to we are brought up idolizing our seniors.
Description: A noun, singular, common is not usually followed by an adjective
Suggestion: Refer to childhood and ideal
Description: The token to is not usually followed by a pronoun, personal, nominative, not 3rd person singular
Suggestion: Refer to to and we
Sentence: So the notion of following the ideal and conceptual way is nurtured in minds right from childhood but often an idealist is seen muddled in making decisions where prudent and realsitic approach is demanded.
No grammatical errors
Sentence: People in their various walks of occupation, business, education etc always yearns for success and try to be idealistic because it promises them of danger-free zone confined within ideal thoughts.
No grammatical errors
Sentence: Very few posses the temerity to face the obstacles of practical lifestyle.Idealism on the contarary seems plausible because there is sure gauranteed success as the approach has been adopted ,tested and tried over the years.
No grammatical errors
Sentence: But if often fails to compete in the practical scenario as resources, conditions, deadlines and pressure ceases one's effort to be ideal and usually results in disappointment and discomfit.
No grammatical errors
Sentence: Assumption held in ideal situations are hardly in congurence with real life situations and so this tends to failure resulting in loss of enthusiasm and anxiety.
No grammatical errors
Sentence: Pragmatic approach requires lot of courage since the approach has never been experimented and it requires one to premeditate and analyze the conditions and work accordingly.It takes lot of diligence and arduous effort to walk along the off traded path.
No grammatical errors
Sentence: As an illustrative example if company is facing a loss in a product because of increased competition then idealistic approach would suggest reducing the cost of commodity and delivering best quality.Now quality and cost have direct proportion and so acheiving idealism results in dilemma.
Description: The fragment . Now quality is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace Now with adjective
Sentence: Pracitcal attitude in this scenario would be to study the competitor , analyze the market trends and accordingly make aggressive advertisements and promotions keeping other factors constant whcich would result in better market capitalization.
No grammatical errors
Sentence: History is the evidence of the fact that pragmatist have been able to chase the desired results and reach the zenith of success by being politic rather than ideal and ethical.
No grammatical errors
Sentence: The engineer who studies his model in ideal situation will sought to make the ideal design but practical approach would require him to study his design in all inclement weather.
Description: The word studies is not usually used as a verb, present tense, 3rd person singular
Suggestion: Refer to studies
Description: The word will is not usually used as a noun, singular, common
Suggestion: Refer to will
Sentence: This practical approach is neccessary to make improptu decisions and situations where ideal thoughts and actions does not suffice.
No grammatical errors
Sentence: In this competitive world being ideal is what every individual , organizaion, venture aims to achieve but pragmatism is required to survive.
No grammatical errors
Sentence: Ideal approach may seem the best but prudent thinking is required in response to variation and achieveing realistic goals.
No grammatical errors