A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.
Education is an indispensible part of every individual of the country. Education with good fundamental knowledge can keep an individual competiting in the current scenario of our rapidly developing economy. Without a good education, one can face lot of hindrances in day-today life.
With a increasing number of population of nation results in more number of schools and colleges in the country. This gives a wide and thorough exposure to the aspirants. If we look at the highly growing economy of the world, every new born child is made to run in the race of horses. And, there exist a huge number...
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Sentence: For example, highly priveledged schools like Singhania high schools or the group of Xavier's institute, they have adopted an international level of education system which will ensure that students will be groomed very well and along with the all round development of any students you pick from the thousands of students enrooled in these schools.
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Sentence: So, nation should look after this critical issue and make some positive actions in order to create a generalised form of education which will have common curriculum to study for all the students enrolled in the school in the nation.
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Sentence: Rather, some low income people might face problems with the advent of this generalised education sysytem.
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Sentence: Govenrnment should provide grants and scolarships to the poor and well deserved students to encourage the education.
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