A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.
Many countries like England, Singapore, China, Italy, Korea, etc. have made it possible to provide a National curriculum. But still countries with heavy population and many states its tough to provide National curriculum. Providing same education to every state students of a country is the best possible gift a country would give to its men, but it can create problems too on he other hand.
Educating every student in the equal manner will bring Unified educational front, which will as a result give each state of that nation the same standard. Hence, the level of education among the states of ...
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Sentence: But still countries with heavy population and many states its tough to provide National curriculum.
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