"the problem of poor teacher performance that has plagued the state public school system is bound to become a good deal less serious in the future. the state has initiated comprehensive guidelines that oblige state teachers to complete a number of require

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"the problem of poor teacher performance that has plagued the state public school system is bound to become a good deal less serious in the future. the state has initiated comprehensive guidelines that oblige state teachers to complete a number of required credits in education and educational psychology at the graduate level before being certified".

The arguement above states that the poor perfomance of teacher has plagued the public schools. this problem considered by the government has been eliminated by emphasising the teachers to complete a required number of credits before being certified as a teacher thus emphasize on just passing certain credits is encouraged solely for a teacher to be certified and defined to be a teacher who would eliminate the existing flaws in the system.

Training a teacher to pass certain credits is mere an another exam which would just insist them to gain the credits by impractical way of studying rather than making up way to solve the flaws. thus the government's importance over stressing teachers to pass certain credits is baseless in solving the inconsistencies in the system. Teachers must be trained well to understand the psycology of the student. they must undergo certain student analysis program. they pave way in analysing what makes the system worse and what would probably make up to obviate the flaws.

teachers must also be tested about their ways of articulation because not all the persons who are well versed would be a perfect teacher because they might lag somewhere in putting forth the ideas and thoughts. thus rather than stressing on just getting the credits system must also do considerably to improve teacher's articulation. thus they can make even the obscure things perceptible by the student.

the state government hasnot told anything about how psycology training will be given to a teacher, if the training is going to be just a materialistic study rather than practical one then it wouldn't reach the mark to solve the problem. Teachers must be allowed to go on training in schools before certification this would probably make them understand what will be the environment they are going to work. thus credits earned will seldom determine an effective teacher, the efficacy of a teacher as the whole depends on how good a person handles the students of varying capacity. credits would be an ineffective way of determining a good teacher and relying on it to eliminate the flaws would be a insensible method.

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Sentence: The arguement above states that the poor perfomance of teacher has plagued the public schools.
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Sentence: This problem considered by the government has been eliminated by emphasising the teachers to complete a required number of credits before being certified as a teacher thus emphasize on just passing certain credits is encouraged solely for a teacher to be certified and defined to be a teacher who would eliminate the existing flaws in the system.
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Sentence: Teachers must be trained well to understand the psycology of the student.
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Sentence: They pave way in analysing what makes the system worse and what would probably make up to obviate the flaws.
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Sentence: the state government hasnot told anything about how psycology training will be given to a teacher, if the training is going to be just a materialistic study rather than practical one then it wouldn't reach the mark to solve the problem.
Error: psycology Suggestion: psychology

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