Some people believe that society should try to save every plant and animal species, despite the expense to humans in effort, time, and financial well-being. Others believe that society need not make extraordinary efforts, especially at a great cost in money and jobs, to save endangered species.
Write a response in which you discuss which view more closely aligns with your own position and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should address both of the views presented.
The march of human progress have undoubtly strained our resources and endangered many plant and animal species. We have destroyed entire area of forest to build suburban homes and drilled deep into the ocean to continue to supply ourselves with energy. We cannot continue to grow at the expense of our environment. We need to be aware of the effects of our actions and try our best to perseve the plant and animal species that belong on mother earth with us.
Over the last decades, we have improved our quality of living signficantly. However, these achievements have put many plant and animal sp...
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Sentence: Despite these expenses, we need to be prepared to make the sacrifices because it will ensure the earth continue to exists for future generations.
Description: The token to is not usually followed by a verb, present tense, 3rd person singular
Suggestion: Refer to to and exists
Sentence: We need to be aware of the effects of our actions and try our best to perseve the plant and animal species that belong on mother earth with us.
Error: perseve Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: Over the last decades, we have improved our quality of living signficantly.
Error: signficantly Suggestion: significantly
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