to understand the most important characteristics of a society one must study its major cities

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to understand the most important characteristics of a society one must study its major cities

There is a proverb saying “when you are in Rome do as the Romans do” i.e. the Rome people expect the people from outside to behave as Romans. Therefore from this one can understand the characteristics of the Rome city. This could have been possible in olden days. Because now-a-days cities mainly major cities no carry their culture due to many reasons like change of lifestyle or migration from different areas.

These days one can find many migrants from other places in major cities like in Texas are nearly 14 nations citizens dwell over there and obviously every nation has different culture and accordingly the characteristics. For a moment keeping the migrations subject aside; the highly growing cities like New York which is considered as the now of the busiest cities in the world and the people are very busy in that city. They don’t even have the time to prepare food in the home and have it. So they take the fast foods on their way. But this is not their culture. To understand the characteristics of the society one must go to countryside where one can find the depth of the culture of an area or society.

To defend this let us take the example of the city Paris which is considered as ambassador city for fashion related subjects. This city now acts as magnet for fashion loving people. Manu people settled also whose root is somewhere else. Now Paris do not show the mirror image of characteristics of the French society but indeed different.

One important point to noted is that all major cities are more or less displays same characteristics since life style in cities almost same.

The given statement is applicable mainly in olden days. For instance if study the characteristics of Harappa and Mohenjo-Daro then one can get the culture of that society.

To conclude in order study the important characteristics of the society one must go to countryside. Studying the major cities mainly results in contemporary characteristics not the original one.

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Sentence: One important point to noted is that all major cities are more or less displays same characteristics since life style in cities almost same.
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