All college and university students would benefit from spending at least one semester studying in a foreign country.”

Essay topics:

All college and university students would benefit from spending at least one semester studying in a foreign country.”

Students are in a cardinal stage of their careers when they pursue education in a college or university. An educational institution offers a platform of attaining knowledge, self-development, and most substantially create a foundation for successful careers for the students. The prompt asserts benefit of a student studying in a foreign country while pursuing education in college or university. I in my view, this globalization of education might prove to be a plus for the students as it would provide students to explore the horizons of the world, allowing better learning, better future.

Now-a-days, educational institutes are making international alliances between them, so that they could send their students to each other's university, in an exchange program. For instance, National University of Singapore, offers M.S. in construction management bifurcated in a two year program. One year to be studied in National University of Singapore and the following year to be studied in Deft University, Netherlands.

Furthermore, when a student would be studying in a foreign land with most probably no corroboration of any kind, would develop drastically. A student would attain attributes such as independence, self-confidence, gregariousness, etc. Learners would achieve an international exposure, would expand in supposedly every characteristics of theirs. Students would encounter disparate culture, society, customs, beliefs, etc. which would reinforce one's personality.
Moreover, students would imbibe knowledge from an array of professors and teachers, resulting in their progress of their intellectual spectrum.

As a coda to my opinions, the conviction of ratifying students to study in abroad for a certain period of time in their education is an excellent notion. It would surely benefit and allow students to proliferate in their lives and careers, and thus, making themselves valuable assets for the society.

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Average: 5.8 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 132, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'others'' or 'other's'?
Suggestion: others'; other's
... they could send their students to each others university, in an exchange program. For...
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Line 6, column 443, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...ms, beliefs, etc. which would reinforce ones personality. Moreover, students would...
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Line 9, column 97, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...udents to study in abroad for a certain period of time in their education is an excellent noti...
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'furthermore', 'if', 'moreover', 'so', 'thus', 'while', 'for instance', 'such as', 'in my view']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.285714285714 0.240241500013 119% => OK
Verbs: 0.118541033435 0.157235817809 75% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0607902735562 0.0880659088768 69% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0303951367781 0.0497285424764 61% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0455927051672 0.0444667217837 103% => OK
Prepositions: 0.130699088146 0.12292977631 106% => OK
Participles: 0.0364741641337 0.0406280797675 90% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.39123032657 2.79330140395 121% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0243161094225 0.030933414821 79% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0942249240122 0.0997080785238 95% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0364741641337 0.0249443105267 146% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00911854103343 0.0148568991511 61% => OK

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1936.0 2732.02544248 71% => OK
No of words: 287.0 452.878318584 63% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.7456445993 6.0361032391 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.58838876751 90% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.466898954704 0.366273622748 127% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.404181184669 0.280924506359 144% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.320557491289 0.200843997647 160% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.216027874564 0.132149295362 163% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.39123032657 2.79330140395 121% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 219.290929204 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.567944250871 0.48968727796 116% => OK
Word variations: 59.4012648445 55.4138127331 107% => OK
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6194690265 78% => OK
Sentence length: 17.9375 23.380412469 77% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.7299954265 59.4972553346 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.0 141.124799967 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9375 23.380412469 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.625 0.674092028746 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.21349557522 58% => OK
Readability: 58.3556184669 51.4728631049 113% => OK
Elegance: 2.328125 1.64882698954 141% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.278536188657 0.391690518653 71% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0852236374255 0.123202303941 69% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0526467097648 0.077325440228 68% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.573339165869 0.547984918172 105% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.15888817304 0.149214159877 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10961195122 0.161403998019 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0628781519981 0.0892212321368 70% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.227519082517 0.385218514788 59% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0946817515154 0.0692045440612 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168053993581 0.275328986314 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.02517019617 0.0653680567796 39% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.4325221239 77% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.30420353982 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88274336283 164% => OK
Positive topic words: 8.0 7.22455752212 111% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 3.66592920354 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 7.0 2.70907079646 258% => OK
Total topic words: 15.0 13.5995575221 110% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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