All college and university students would benefit from spending at least one semester studying in a foreign country.
By the passage of time the education system and the ways of teaching has changed a lot. There are different styles of teaching in other countries. That’s why we can say that some countries are way ahead in technology and development. We can say that there advancement in science and technology is because of their educational institution who are doing their best to educate their young generation. As we can see that by the passage of time the Asian countries student are getting more interested to study abroad.
However, It’s become a trend in university to send their best student for one semester in foreign country, but whether this trend is beneficial or not for these student, it become a question in these days. If look at the benefit of studying abroad we can numerous benefit that sudent can gain. First student got the opportunity to know about different cultures, how they live there, how they spend their life. They have the opportunity to explore their culture, traditions and their education systems. They can meet teachers and mentors, get the idea to about future planning, In which field they have to continue their future studies.
Moreover, it is quite refreshing for a undergraduate student but if we look at another perspective it could lead to disappointment if our student go abroad they look at the facilities that those institution given to their student, they could think why I am not studying, he could think if I spend all of my semesters here I can have more opportunity to grow and excel quickly in my career. As we know we are living in third world country it’s not possible for our possible to afford, that could break their heart. Another factor we should consider that Colleges and universities could not give scholarships to every student, It is unrealistic. Students have to afford the expenses at their own which involve the travelling ticket, Hostel room and food as well.
To Sum up we could say the idea looks quite interesting, but it has many pros and cons as well, We have to consider the disadvantages which could not be neglect. Every student wants to study abroad only few are fortunate who live this dream. We have to spend our time to develop our own educational institution, So these students can compete with foreign country students
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, look, moreover, so, third, well, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 19.5258426966 56% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 12.4196629213 129% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 58.0 33.0505617978 175% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 58.6224719101 75% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1920.0 2235.4752809 86% => OK
No of words: 393.0 442.535393258 89% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88549618321 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45244063426 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71810993989 2.79657885939 97% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 215.323595506 89% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.486005089059 0.4932671777 99% => OK
syllable_count: 595.8 704.065955056 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 6.24550561798 176% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Interrogative: 2.0 0.740449438202 270% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 72.9462996303 60.3974514979 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.941176471 118.986275619 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1176470588 23.4991977007 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.94117647059 5.21951772744 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 7.80617977528 102% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188350819094 0.243740707755 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.059835666565 0.0831039109588 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0634875182107 0.0758088955206 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114927128469 0.150359130593 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0558399771203 0.0667264976115 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 14.1392134831 93% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 48.8420337079 116% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 12.1639044944 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 8.38706741573 95% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 100.480337079 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.8971910112 76% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => The average readability is low. Need to improve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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