All parents should be required to volunteer time to their children’s schools.
The statement claims that all parent should need to volunteer time to their children’s schools. When trying to delineate, statement gives the idea of parents giving dedication of their schools. Parents are the people who are trying to give efforts to their children without any circumstances. There are two attractive reasons that influence the statement to agree: parents can make interconnection with their children, and make more spare time to communicate with children.
To begin with, all parents need volunteer time because parents and children will have stronger interconnection each other than previous ordinary times. When parents go to the schools and try to teach a lesson to their children, obviously all children from other parents as well, they will bring their life experiences about how they make happiness, how they make a turning point. Children will understand and learn how their parents live; indeed they would have sympathy with their parents.
Moreover, parents can make spare time to communicate with children. Take for instance, in the morning, parents will make a breakfast and they will prepare for going work, while children prepare for their schooling and their study. Parents will take children to their schools and conversation will be very simple, and normal. However, if parents are going to volunteer time to their children’s schools, then it will be very helpful for both of them, because they will communicate with each other during class and it will be more progressive than ordinary times.
Admittedly, parents also have more spare time communicate with their children. All parents are really busy at their work; especially when they are in business and try to make a contract for cooperation. They always encumber to bring their work so that they support their family. However, volunteer time from parents has a little different from the
In conclusion, the general vision of the statement is that how parents dedicate to their children. It is controversial issue because all parents should have responsibility to support to their children; they have to work. However, with those compelling reasons above, it will buttress the idea that all parents need volunteer time to their children’s schools.
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... time to their children's schools.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, really, so, then, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 19.5258426966 56% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 12.4196629213 153% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 40.0 33.0505617978 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 58.6224719101 77% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1909.0 2235.4752809 85% => OK
No of words: 357.0 442.535393258 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34733893557 5.05705443957 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34677393335 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78175659929 2.79657885939 99% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 215.323595506 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.414565826331 0.4932671777 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 556.2 704.065955056 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Interrogative: 3.0 0.740449438202 405% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.6293528505 60.3974514979 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.294117647 118.986275619 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 23.4991977007 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.29411764706 5.21951772744 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.49008978652 0.243740707755 201% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.225423086661 0.0831039109588 271% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.128081980192 0.0758088955206 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.352414167763 0.150359130593 234% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0834175893851 0.0667264976115 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 14.1392134831 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 48.8420337079 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.75 12.1639044944 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.07 8.38706741573 84% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 100.480337079 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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