Any leader who is quickly and easily influenced by shifts in popular opinion will accomplish little.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
To a larger extent, it can be said with confidence that if the leader will keep changing his decision, direction or strategy based on the reactions he is going to get from the public, then he won't be able to achieve what he has thought for his nation/country. His job is not to take easy decisions and be simply famous among the public, but to take hard decisions and think of the future and the benefits, his policies are going to bring to his nation. However, in certain cases, it is wise to roll back the decision if the push back is really strong or the consequence of implementing the particular policy is going to do more damage than good. I shall be defending this by embellishing more details in the succeeding paragraphs.
Firstly, let's take the example of Malaysia's Mahathir Muhammad. His vision and enforcement of the majority of long-sighted policies have taken Malaysia to a level what it is today. Its economy is booming and getting stronger with every passing year. Trade and political relationships have improved multifold, not only with neighboring countries but also globally. All this has been made possible for the vision Mahater had in mind for Malaysia. To achieve all this, of course, he had to take certain hard decisions. Implementing tax rules, based on various income brackets and increasing the ratios for business was not easy. you can only discharge this if you are convinced that whatever you are doing is needed and is the right move for the country. you will face certain challenges in accomplishing what you want, but it is worth taking up those challenges once you are convinced of the results.
A similar example is that of China. we all know, China is still the largest country by population. Its population has reached 1.5 billion. However, this could have been way more if the government - or its leaders - have not enforced the rule of having only one kid per family. it is not hard to imagine, getting such a rule approved by the parliament is never easy. But the leaders were convinced hence they got it approved and had to struggle a lot to get this enforced throughout the country. The push back was tremendous but for the greater good, that has to be implemented. Now after around 15 years, analysts around the globe have started appreciating this wise move by China and its leaders.
However, there can be cases when certain decisions are enforced without proper due diligence. The probability of failure in those cases is relatively high and as the public starts showing their frustration and register their reaction through social media and even through riots, governments are forced to roll back those decisions.
To recapitulate, a true leader is the one who knows what's best for his nation and country and does all his best in his capacity to enforce the laws what he has thought would serve best in country's favor even if he gets a push back or negative response from the public for the time being. In the longer run, he will be one who will be acknowledged for this wisdom and long-sightedness.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, really, so, still, then, as to, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 36.0 19.5258426966 184% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 25.0 14.8657303371 168% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 52.0 33.0505617978 157% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 57.0 58.6224719101 97% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2528.0 2235.4752809 113% => OK
No of words: 530.0 442.535393258 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76981132075 5.05705443957 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.79809637944 4.55969084622 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68833006684 2.79657885939 96% => OK
Unique words: 263.0 215.323595506 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.496226415094 0.4932671777 101% => OK
syllable_count: 782.1 704.065955056 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 6.24550561798 256% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.2370786517 124% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.7705365116 60.3974514979 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.12 118.986275619 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2 23.4991977007 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.52 5.21951772744 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 19.0 10.2758426966 185% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.13994939199 0.243740707755 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0372205112467 0.0831039109588 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0600058212397 0.0758088955206 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0724520607835 0.150359130593 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0730730736312 0.0667264976115 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 14.1392134831 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 48.8420337079 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 12.1639044944 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 8.38706741573 97% => OK
difficult_words: 117.0 100.480337079 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.0 11.8971910112 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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