The best ideas arise from a passionate interest in commonplace things.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
Commonplace things indeed kindle innovative ideas. All it requires is someone who looks at them with an enthusiasm of making them better. Modern world is rife with such examples. All the technology based startup up are inspired by these common things that surround us. Several details can be given to support the statement.
Firstly, the human interest has always been dedicated towards making the world around us more efficient, all it requires is some one dexterous enough to analyze the situation thoroughly. An interested look at a spherical rock inspired man to place a cart over it, on more streamlined evolution it became the wheel.
Secondly, only the compassion can inspire determination which is the only criterion for success of ideas. Each one of us is gifted with imagination and innovation. Only passion is known to provide the myriad of determination needed to pursue the innovation. Take for instance, Allen Turing, the man who first designed the architecture of computer, it was his interest that kept him determined, even in difficult times of war facing immense censure, to automate the arduous process of deciphering the German encryption code.
Thirdly, interest is what makes one curious, and curiosity is what leads the search for knowledge. Questioning enlightens obfuscated approach which in turn inspires creativity for invention. For example, Mr. Elon Musk, as told by his mother from early childhood had asked questions that were too mature for children of that age. As explained by Mr. Musk himself, it was his interest in getting the profound understanding which made him that curious.
In contrast to statement, need is also known to father innovation, the need of fulfilling one's requirements and basic facilities have inspired man for long time. The need of light lead to invention of torch, the need of travelling invented means of transportation. But we can clearly see that need is the bigger picture which spawns interest. It is the need to cure Zika virus that has inspired interest of researchers in studying mosquitoes and the impact of their bite on fetus.
Conclusively, not only interest can inspire the innovation, but it plays a vital role in realizing this ideas. It has kept man pursuing his tendency to invent. Mere ideas are abstract thoughts but its the interest that is required to transform this ideas into reality.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, look, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, thus, as to, for example, for instance, in contrast, in contrast to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.5258426966 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 14.8657303371 47% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.3162921348 124% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 33.0505617978 106% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 58.6224719101 82% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 12.9106741573 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1996.0 2235.4752809 89% => OK
No of words: 387.0 442.535393258 87% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15762273902 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43534841618 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83602531976 2.79657885939 101% => OK
Unique words: 230.0 215.323595506 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594315245478 0.4932671777 120% => OK
syllable_count: 616.5 704.065955056 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.740449438202 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.2370786517 109% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The sentence length is short
Sentence length SD: 50.2563675502 60.3974514979 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.7272727273 118.986275619 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5909090909 23.4991977007 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.45454545455 5.21951772744 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 10.2758426966 175% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.129066984401 0.243740707755 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0380519957198 0.0831039109588 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0258466173053 0.0758088955206 34% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0632896214253 0.150359130593 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0276667983877 0.0667264976115 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 14.1392134831 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 48.8420337079 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.35 12.1639044944 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.25 8.38706741573 110% => OK
difficult_words: 117.0 100.480337079 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.8971910112 59% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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