The best ideas arise from a passionate interest in commonplace things.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position
Yes, best ideas arise from passionate interest but need not be necessary it is in common place things. One cannot confine best ideas to only commonplace things. Best ideas are arising from any domain. Yes, it is also true that commonplace things teaches us or guides us in various discoveries and inventions, specially nature, and scientist have even succeeded in replicating many such things but there are other domain where breakthroughs are happening.
There are ideas such as nuclear power, nanotechnology, atomic energy, the famous E=mc^2 by Einstein which had great impact on the planet, are not at all developed from commonplace things but are no doubt one of the best scientific breakthroughs. Not only in science but in archeology, humanities, history, arts, commerce etc. people, with their passion and interest are developing ideas without reliance on commonplace things.
Commonplace things have taught mankind a great deal of things, especially nature, and we are even trying to get inspiration from it. For example Bamboo, on the search for materials having higher compressive strength as well as tensile strength to be used in the construction industry, finally someone introduced bamboo which has exactly what the scientist are looking for decades, and researches are even going on. Apart from that scientist are involved in various such experimentations and are even successful in replicating a great deal of the natures elements, which are no doubt are great achievements related to commonplace things and can be even termed best but innovations and ideas in other fields cannot be looked down upon, as they also have equivalent impact on the mankind.
Passion and interest are the true driving force towards success, irrespective of the field or domain. One’s success can be entirely or partially dependent on commonplace things or may also completely devoid of such influence but finally what matters is the success, which is achieved through passionate interest dedication and hard work.
Therefore, I believe that true passion and interest give rise to exceptional ideas whether it is related to commonplace things or not. Taking inspiration and ideas from commonplace things is a good approach in today’s concerned world but it is not highly recommended to generate good ideas. In a nutshell, Passionate interest in any field of study can yield high-value ideas and discoveries.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: The Best
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...ng many such things but there are other domain where breakthroughs are happening. ...
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...ain where breakthroughs are happening. There are ideas such as nuclear power, n...
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...anotechnology, atomic energy, the famous E=mc^2 by Einstein which had great impac...
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...umanities, history, arts, commerce etc. people, with their passion and interest are de...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'finally', 'if', 'look', 'may', 'so', 'therefore', 'well', 'apart from', 'as to', 'for example', 'no doubt', 'such as', 'as well as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.262790697674 0.240241500013 109% => OK
Verbs: 0.160465116279 0.157235817809 102% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0976744186047 0.0880659088768 111% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0720930232558 0.0497285424764 145% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0255813953488 0.0444667217837 58% => OK
Prepositions: 0.104651162791 0.12292977631 85% => OK
Participles: 0.0488372093023 0.0406280797675 120% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.9487905716 2.79330140395 106% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0162790697674 0.030933414821 53% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0488372093023 0.0997080785238 49% => Some determiners wanted.
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0162790697674 0.0249443105267 65% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0162790697674 0.0148568991511 110% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2426.0 2732.02544248 89% => OK
No of words: 381.0 452.878318584 84% => OK
Chars per words: 6.36745406824 6.0361032391 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41805628031 4.58838876751 96% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.406824146982 0.366273622748 111% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.322834645669 0.280924506359 115% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.215223097113 0.200843997647 107% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.160104986877 0.132149295362 121% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9487905716 2.79330140395 106% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 219.290929204 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.50656167979 0.48968727796 103% => OK
Word variations: 54.8459768147 55.4138127331 99% => OK
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6194690265 73% => OK
Sentence length: 25.4 23.380412469 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 92.4715932357 59.4972553346 155% => OK
Chars per sentence: 161.733333333 141.124799967 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.4 23.380412469 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.0 0.674092028746 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.21349557522 153% => OK
Readability: 57.6834645669 51.4728631049 112% => OK
Elegance: 1.61261261261 1.64882698954 98% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.349793463649 0.391690518653 89% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.132805973779 0.123202303941 108% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0697193548239 0.077325440228 90% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.588834167631 0.547984918172 107% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.160078598043 0.149214159877 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.150489926581 0.161403998019 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0434440727588 0.0892212321368 49% => The sentences are too close to each other.
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.296341413188 0.385218514788 77% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0750421047701 0.0692045440612 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.230039294996 0.275328986314 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0242791861863 0.0653680567796 37% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.4325221239 125% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.30420353982 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88274336283 20% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 9.0 7.22455752212 125% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 3.66592920354 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 0.0 2.70907079646 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 9.0 13.5995575221 66% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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